I LOVE the way you've done the "S". It's great. And I love the aqua colour. And I like how the "k" runs on, as if the person was speaking...
My only criticism is that it's quite hard to read the word "speak". eg The circle in the "p" is really small and the "k" looks more like an "h".
And the colour of the words "your vision" is a little dull. Maybe a brighter more cheerful violet or indigo or pink? Or maybe the font is too fine. But those two words don't really jump out yet.
Re #47 - the word "Speak" is easier to read now, so that's good.
I like the pink colour you've use in "your vision", but the font is too swirly. It makes the whole image look to complicated.
Can you change the font in "your vision" to something simple and bold. Like in your first image, but a little thicker and stronger, in the new pink colour.
If the word speak is really swirly and ornate, then the other words need to be simple, strong and clear.
Hey there, #50 is better. I still find the word speak a little hard to read. Can you make the circle in the p and the circle in the K both bigger?
I'd also like to see it with the words "your vision" In the lovely purple colour you first used, but with the new nice thick bold font. It might look even better than the pink.
I love the dark blue streak in the "S", so do keep that. But I do prefer it with the pretty eye in the S rather than the purple splotch. So can you do a version with your original "S" with the eye in it but with the dark blue streak? Thanks.
Re the bottom half of the image: I think the word "vision" might look better in the purple colour after all. Now that it's light blue, the top word "Speak" doesn't stand out so much.
Or you could try the word "Vision" in the dark blue colour you've used in the streak. Maybe try both? So basically, the top line will be aqua and the bottom line will be something that contrasts with the aqua.
I do like the aqua swoosh under the word "your", as that ties the colour scheme from the top into the bottom.
And also with your new changes, you'll still need to find a way to differentiate the two words "your" And "vision", so that they are both strong and easy to read, but with an emphasis on the word "your". So maybe you could keep the light blue swoosh at the bottom. Or try something else to achieve that.
I like the way you've done "speak" in #165. Lock that in!
I've decided that I don't like the swoosh under the word "your". One of the beauties of your design is how simple it is. I think the swoosh clutters it. Can I see #165 without the swoosh?
You could make the words "your" and "vision" be a bit larger.
Now we have to decide on the colour for the word "vision". I don't like the baby pink colour in #164. Maybe you could try putting the word "vision" in the same aqua you've used for the eye? Or in the hot pink colour that's being used in the other designs? Any other ideas?
I need all three words to stand out, but the design still to look simple.
Hey, let's keep the word "speak" as it is, coz I love it like that!
And I actually prefer the design with both "your" and "vision" in the same purple colour.
BUT I've decided to emphasise the word "Vision" more than the word "your".
So could you do a version with "speak" exactly as it is, and with "your" and "vision" both in the purple colour. Then find a way to make the word vision stand out more than the word "your". eg you could make the 'vision" font bigger than the "your" font, like you did in #143... or maybe you have a better idea?