I really like your designs, but I don't love the colours you're using.
The pink in #31, #33, #35, #36 is too red for me. I really prefer a more blue-based pastel pink, if you're going to use pink.
if you're going to do a sun, I prefer it to be all yellow, as I really don't like the colour orange!
The purples you're using in #29 and #30 are all too dark for me. I prefer cheerful, more pastel colours. I like the colour blue you used in #32 better, and if you included a cheerful pink or purple in this image it would look good.
Actually, you can see the colours in #21 by Graphixsphere - those are the kinds of colours I like.
I really LOVE the drawing of the person in #35. The writing is much too ornate - you can't relaly read it. But the figure is beautiful. If there's a way to do the writing that is more readable, taht would be good. And obvsiouly in the colours I like.
Hey there, you haven't actually changed the colours, you've just faded them so they're almost invisible!
Can you try actually using different colours, not just making them lighter? Have a look at the colours in the design I've ranked first. They are strong, bright, cheerful blue-based colours.
Hey can you do a version of #39 thats not so faded. ie just with a bright aqua and a bright pink, and a nice bright pink sun.
Am realising that I just don't like yellow and orange, even when it's the sun!
The only yellow one that works for me is #33, but that's probably because there's no orange in it and there's only one other colour. But generally, I prefer blues, violets and pinks.
In your newer design, I still love the shape of your flying woman, but I do find the font very hard to read... Is there another way to do it?
#46 is great! The best colour scheme you've used so far.
Re #48 - I really like how you've emphasised the word "YOUR". That's fantastic. I like the colours, and I like the yellow sun.
I wonder if you can elongate the image of the person, a bit like you did in #45, and put it with the words you did in #48, so there will be a big long swoosh under the words kinda like the person is flying. Would that work?
The next thing to try is to use the colour scheme from #46, which I still love. Aqua is my favourite colour, so I'd rather have that as the main colour in the logo and have other colours as highlights. (eg pink/purple/yellow)
So try a version where the flying person is blue.
We can try it with a yellow sun and with a pink sun.
I really like #89, #90, #92 with the pink sun. Also like #95, #96, #97. Baiscally Ilike the ones where there are only two volours in the text and the word "your" jumps out.
I'm still not sure which of these 6 is my favourite. Will let it sit for a while.
One last idea - could you do a version like #90, but instead of a pink sun behind the person, maybe have some stars or some sparkles or just some lines radiating out?
Would be worth trying, as I'm still not sure about the sun...
These are much better. I really like #109 - it's beautiful and subtle.
My only suggestion is to try putting a little bit more pink amongst the blue stars. And maybe even try a version with some flecks of purple in the stars too.
I've shown some of my friends. They all love your designs, but they are split down the middle between the stars and the yellow sun...
Can you do a version of #122 and #96 but with the aqua words "speak" and "vision" larger, so the pink word "your" doesn't stand out as much. It will still have an emphasis because it is in pink. But my friends pointed out to me that the words "speak and "vision" are just as important as "your"....
Thank you Tahnee.. and absolutely no problem with your request..say hello to your friend there, glad they like my works:) please check the updates:#128 #129 #130 #131
Thanks! What's the difference between #128 and #129, #130 and #131?
Can you actually make the word YOUR slightly smaller, and the words "Speak" and "Vision" slightly bigger. I'd like to see what that looks like before I rank them. That way the words won't be so crowded into the space.
Just choose one of the designs to change the word size. Once we have the wording exactly right, we can see how it looks with the stars vs yellow sun vs pink star.
Another idea a friend if mine had was to have the words SPEAK and VISION in capital letters in a nice bold font, so that they will still stand out even though the word "your" is bigger and in pink.
Could you try this, again just with the same one design?
Once we get the wording right, the rest will be easy.
Okay, so now I know that I don't like the capitals! I preferred your earlier design, ie #128.
Can you do a version of #128 with the fonts nice and big like in #136, but maybe move the words slightly higher so they are not so squashed against the tail of the person, and so you can put a tiny bit more room between each word.
ALSO, I'm realising as I look at the small thumbnail version of your designs, that the top of the letters in "speak" and "vision" is a little blurry because you've faded the colour gradient at the top. This is more apparent now that the words are bigger...
In your next version can you remove the fading in these words, so they are nice and clear and strong and easy to read.
It would be worth also doing one version of #137 without the fading, because maybe the capital letters will look good if they're not blurry...
Just do a test version of each with the stars. Once we have the fonts correct, I can choose between stars, yellow sun, pink star etc!
OMG I don't know how I'm going to choose between all these beautiful designs by all you guys, now they're all coming to fruition!
Hey there, after looking at all your designs, I think I've come up with the perfect way to do the text.
I like the thickness of all three words in #153/#154, so let's lock that font thickness in.
I prefer it in small caps.
I like it without the gradient, so the blue is all the same shade of blue and the pink is all the same shade of pink.
I want the words to fit INSIDE the circle, like in your earlier designs. (#154 is too big) One thing you haven't tried is to CENTER all three words. (ie the word "your' will start a little further to the left than the other two words. The "v" of "vision" will probably be slightly to the left of the "s" of "speak.") This will probably help the three words to fit nicely into the circle.
(If you have to make the other "speak" and "vision" a little smaller to fit this, that should be okay now that the gradient has been removed and we've agreed on the font thickness. But do them as big as you can so that they still fit.)
The three words need to be spaced far enough apart so that the dots of the "i" aren't squashed in, but close enough together so that all three words fit into the circle.
Nearly there! once we get these words right, I can choose which graphic I like best...
#186 fits perfectly! I definitely prefer the three words to be centred like this.
A couple of other tiny changes.
(1) Can you make the blue letters in "speak" and "vision" a tiny bit more bold or a tiny bit thicker or a tiny bit darker? They look quite pale when I look at them compared to some of the other designers, and also when I compare them to the word "your" in your picture. You might have to use a slightly different font, to have thicker/bolder letters that still fit into the circle.
(2) I'd like to see a version where the word VISION is in capitals.
(3) I'd like to see a version where the word "vision" is in small caps, but with twinky stars for the "i" instead of dots! That would look so sweet! It's okay if you move the word "vision" down slightly to fit the stars. There should be room. Worth a try!
update for point 3. #191 with tiny bolder darker "speak" and "vision" and include the stars i scaled up the size to gave you clear visibilities, what do you think?
I LOVE #191 and #194! They are my favourite of your designs so far. Well done! If I decide to emphasise the "your" they will probably be my favourites.
At the last minute, my marketing people have told me I need to emphasise the word "speak" more than the other two words! In fact, they want me to emphasise the word "your" the least! I'd like to try it out, to see if they are right...
Can you think of a way to do that? If possible, I'd love to keep the rest of your drawing. But you might think of something even better.
I LOVE #191 and #194! They are my favourite of your designs so far. Well done! If I decide to emphasise the "your" they will probably be my favourites.
At the last minute, my marketing people have told me I need to emphasise the word "speak" more than the other two words! In fact, they want me to emphasise the word "your" the least! I'd like to try it out, to see if they are right...
Can you think of a way to do that? If possible, I'd love to keep the rest of your drawing. But you might think of something even better.
Hi Medi, #226 and #228 are great starts on the new design!
I've decided that the little stars on the "i" are a bit disctracting, so let's forget about those. Can I see #191 and #230 without the stars? They are your best designs with the word "your" emphasised.
For the new "speak" design, let's work on #228: Can you make the word "vision" a little bit bigger than "your"? I'd like to see three versions of the word "vision".
(1) in blue, (2) in purple, (3) where the letter "o" looks like a sun. (see eg design #211)
Hey Medi. I've been out all day at photo shoot. Just got home to about 50 new designs! Am slowly removing all the early drafts of everyone's designs, so I can see what I have now.
Because I've been out all day, I haven't been able to give you guys any feedback on your newest designs. So I may have to extand the comp for another couple of days. In any case, I'll be in touch once I've had a chance to go through it all. I may have a few last minute revisions for you.
I've temporarily ranked another designer first, because I didn't get to complete her design while I was away yesterday. I want to be able to compare all the designs once they are complete.
Your design is basically complete for me. The only other thing I would try would be to make the stars on the "i" a little larger, so that you can see them even when the logo is smaller.
So once this other designer has finished their design, I'll rank yours first again so you can try that.