Hey there, the white letters lose their effect when they're not against a dark background. But I know I don't want a dark background...
Hmm...
Can you do a version of this with a white background? I realise that means you'll have to choose a colour for the main text. Maybe aqua or a cheerful purple?
I do really love your drawing and the coloured flowers, so it's worth a try.
Hey I really LOVE your new design. What's the difference between #125 and #126?
Can you do it without the line down the right hand side?
Also, the words "speak" and "vision" are a little fine - a bit hard to read. Can you make them a little thicker and maybe a little bit bigger, so they stand out more? Or you could even try writing them in a different colour to "your" - maybe pink or purple?
Re #127, it's a cute idea, but I don't like the fact that the bubble is black...
Another possibility is to make the top of the "Y" in your new design (#125) look more like the top of the Y in your first design (#115) so that it looks more like a flower, even though the rest of the design will be nice and simple.
Hey there, I LOVE how you've done the flower in #132. Can you make the words "Speak" and "Vision" as large as you have them in #134.
At the moment, the flower petals are crowding the word "speak". One solution might be to move the words "Speak" and "vision" slightly to the right. It might look good anyway, if those two words are a bit longer than "YOUR", given that they're smaller in size.
OR you could angle the flowers, and the top of the Y a little differently, so that the petals are not crowding the word "speak.'
Worth a try.
OMG I don't know how I'm going to choose between all these beautiful designs, now they're all coming to fruition!
(1)(a) Can you do #159 exactly the same, but with a tiny bit of space between each word, so it's easier to read?
(1)(b) Can you also do a version of #159 where the Y is a bit taller and the tail of the Y trails down and to the left a bit more, turning into a simple swoosh under the words. I think that would add a bit more movement to this beautiful design, and look lovely and graceful. Might be balanced to the right if you dot the "i"s in vision with pink.
(2)(a) I also love #163. I love the arrangement of the words, and also the pink dots on the "i"! Can you also put a bit of space between the word "your" and "vision".
(2)(b) And I'd love to see a version of #163 without the blue circle and with a bit more space between the word "your" and "vision".
(3) And I still really love your earlier more vertical design, as in #151. Can you do something like that WITHOUT the black swoosh (I don't like black).
And can you do it with enough space between the petal and the word "speak"? Maybe to create more space, you could make the Y-flower a bit taller and longer, so you can fit the word "speak" in easily under it.
I'd like the words "speak" and "vision" to be a bit bigger too in this design, so that the "your" is still bigger than they are but the difference isn't so great. All three words are important, even though I want to emphasise the "your".
(1) #167 is better. Can you move the word "speak" a tiny bit to the left.
(2) I'd like to see #169 with the word "speak" moved a little to the left.
(3) Re #166 and #167, these are good. Can you also move the first word a bit more to the left, now that you've moved the third word to the right, so that there is equal space between each word.
(4) I still love your vertical design in #170 and #151, but don't like the swoosh under the words. I prefer it without. As I suggested before, maybe to create more space between the petal and "Speak" and between all three words, you could make the Y-flower a bit taller and longer, so there's more space to fit things in under it?
Now that I look at your designs after taking a break, I see that your horizontal design is the best, becuase you read the words in order "Speak your vision". With some of your other designs, even though they are beautiful, I think for someone seeing them for the first time, they might not be able to make sense of the words, because they read "your speak vision"...
So #167 is my favourite for now. (with or without the pink dots on the "i"!)
BUT at the last minute, my marketing people have told me I need to emphasise the word "speak" more than the other two words! In fact, they want me to emphasise the word "your" the least! I'd like to try it out, to see if they are right...