Hey there, I love the COLOURS so much in this one. Perfect colours for me. THat's why I've ranked it first so far. I like the figure of the person, and I love the sparkles. But I don't like the cloud - it makes it look a bit too cartoonish and less elegant.
But a good start!
It feels like you've actually read my brief, unlike most of the others, so thank you!
Hey there, #54 is a bit too heavy looking. I like the colours in #55, but it's still a bit too cartoonish with the circles. And also they obscure the sparkles. I like the sparkles.
Any other ideas, so that we see the person and the sparkles without getting too distracted by the background?
Nice work. Hmmmm.... I do prefer the colours now, but it does look more bland.
I wonder if you could put the purple on the left side of the rings and the blue on the right side. Might look more interesting.
Also, is it possible to make the starts more visible? Maybe a little bigger or more noticeable? If the logo is really small, they might just looks like dots. I really like that they are stars.
At the last minute, my marketing people have told me I need to emphasise the word "speak" more than the other two words! In fact, they want me to emphasise the word "your" the least! I'd like to try it out, to see if they are right...
Can you think of a way to do that? If possible, I'd love to keep the rest of your drawing. But you might think of something even better.