Thank you for your help so far - this is a neat design As part of the final decision process, we have to consider how the logo can be modified to deliver the key parts of our business. As we stated earlier, laser eye correction will be the main part of the business, and so its logo must have impact when compared to other providers on a web comparison site. Similarly, a dentistry web site should show our logo as relevant to that business. Could you review your Space Healthcare design to give us an idea of how these concepts could be developed? The laser business would be branded as 'iSpace' or 'eyeSpace' The dental business would be 'dental space', or 'space dentistry'
this actually quite effective how does the logo feel if its on a white background? is there a modification possible to the dental version that alters the laser beam to something less 'surgical'?
#200 & #201 - variations of #188 & #189 with the addition of curves above 'eye' as an eyelid and below 'dental' as white teeth which emphasizes the words.