Thank you for the great submission. Can you try a darker purple and a darker blue and I'd like to see the word Enhance 1) First letter capped rest lower case with serifs and 2) All caps but with serifs on the letters. I really like the font for the word enhance but adding serifs will make it look more elegant. I really like what what you've done here especially with the water element. I'd really like .com to be a part of it. Please try to incorporate .com into your design. I'm not sure what the best way is...I'll leave that up to you. For the heck of it, can you please move the word enhance.com up to the same line as 'spa' so we can see what it looks like.
Hi Intrepidguppy! Thanks for the revision #77 I like the overall design for this one - the way the word enhance is spaced out evenly underneath the word spa. Do you mind making the following adjustments to this one: 1) Changing the font of the word spa - to me it looks a little casual. If you can find a similar yet more elegant font, that'd be great. 2) Adding the .com and spacing the enhance.com evenly underneath the word spa & graphic. keep the same font for enhance #77 (caps and non-italicized) 3) Darker purple on ENHANCE.com 3) I like the darker blue colour used in #103 4) Adding the tag line: The Finer Details of Excellence (you choos the font and colour) Thanks so much - I hope you have the time to make these adjustments as I think this submission is very strong.
Hi Intrepidguppy Thanks for revisions. Your design is extremely attractive - one of the most artistic of the lot. #244 - Can you bring more emphasis to the word enhance. This will likely mean reducing the size of the word enhance and upping the size of the enhance.com. I'm concerned viewers will think I have a spa rather than offer services for a spa. Also, please correct the tag line to: The Finer Details of Excellence. I love your use of the line to separate the logo from the tag line. Thank you.
Revision - I have not give gradient (shiny) versions as I think in general a logo like what you're asking for should look good first as a solid. It may after all be going on a storefront. I am happy to do that later.
Daer I-Guppy Great work! Okay - Next steps before time runs out! #277 can you please give a couple new versions with the word spa incrementally larger. Also give a sample with tag line left justified (i.e. moved to the left edge of Enhance) (Reason: So there is no chance for readers to think my domain is TheFinerDetailsofExcellence.com), You could also move the .com to the first line so it's clear and then you'll have more room to space out the tag line. Any way to give a bit more closure to the leaf's edges? Right now it looks 'open-ended'. If you can close the base of the leaf just a bit more, that'd be great. ( I also realize you're keeping with the style of the water) Love the purple you chose. If you have time - Please send some versions removing the water/leaf graphic altogether and insert a graphic of a butterfly or nice flower. It would be great if I could carry that graphic through as a theme for my website, print etc. Right now, I can't use 1/2 a leaf and 1/2 a pool of water). Just thinking for the future. Go Go I-G!!! You're doing great work! Keys 505
Revision - I don't feel comfortable doing a butterfly at this time since zornista have basically been the only one using that idea the whole contest. I will ask him/her and if the answer is affirmative I will give it a go.
Out of the lot I'd say 285 is the best - it doesn't seem as barren as without the leaf and ripples. They give the viewer visual cue without being overpowering.
Dear I-Puppy #286 & #285 Really loving these - I agree that this is a great design. Few last details -can you slightly increase the font in the tag line to make it easier to read? -can you make the tag line not rounded corners but rather a semi-circle end on each end?
I think the difference b/w #286 & #285 is that the tag line is a shade higher/lower. Which one do you think works better? I'm thinking lower but I'm not sure. Thank you, Keys505
Thanks for the feedback keys505. The blue enclosed tagline is the same color as the text; it is an optical illusion that occurs when a colors is in the majority as opposed to white. As a thought why I think my submission is the best is that it the fonts are elegant but not excessive; what you would expect from a spa oriented company. I think a block type font for your business would make it feel it too heavy and on the masculine side of the slider (aside from the fact that the design is well done).