The design is very interesting. I like the glow effect. As a centerpiece, how about trying a lady justice or something like that? I won't use SC for anything...the font is good. I would change the stars to dots or something like that.
Thanks for your hard work. I am not yet sold on anything frankly. Can you look along the lines of your distinctive logos. We know I like a black background. Please do not use "SC" for anything as it has no meaning for me. Thanks!
NOTE: my favorite law firm logo so far is the PBW logo that you did. I love it! What if we try something more along those lines (white background) with a fountain pen? Something distinct and unique. Please stay away from using SC as it has no meaning for me. I am not "sold" on any design yet...
I would like to make the lettering of the firm name darker as well. For now, let's omit the slogan too. I do not think we need it. I love the shadow of lady justice. Awesome idea and well done! Color-wise, let's do black and gold (I think the gold touches on the pen make it regal looking and will be enough). Keep the white background...
Sorry! I love the mont blanc pen. I am trying to figure out the placement like you. I think the left side is the best side. Perhaps you can try Large and Small Caps like the 3rd ranked logo. The spacing on those words is good too. The only other thing we can play with is putting a thin gold line between Southern California on the top and Family Law Group on the bottom.
If you look at 5 and 7 rank you can see ideas for the thin gold line. Font style should be like the 3rd rank. I like the small and large caps the best.
I love it. The font is great now - small and large caps is best like the first ranked one. Idea - is there a way to make the line look like it was drawn by the pen and have it fade away as it gets to the tip. It may not work but that way the line looks deliberate. Thoughts?
I am torn between yours and number 2. I love the color and hopefulness of number 2 but love the meaning and depth of your design...it is a very tough decision.