This is a great start! The most important thing to express is that we're offering an adventure! I think this is on the right track but has some work to do and I'd be interested to see alternative versions along the same lines.
Hi nalapraja, sorry about the delay! Our adventures run all over the great Pacific NW in the USA. We travel over beautiful mountain ranges near amazing bodies of water. Most of our trips involve transporting people via luxury bus to a destination (like Leavenworth, WA) to embark on rafting trips, tubing trips, visit Leavenworth during Christmas time, or even do more art and food related events like sushi making and sake tasting class or wreath making. Please let me know if you'd like more info!
I love #61. Would it be possible to make Sound and Excursions the same size font. We don't want to emphasize Sound over Excursions if at all possible. If you have variations of 61 you'd like me to see, that'd be great too!