I prefer the version without the catchphrase, beneath.
I love the fonts you're using, and I love the idea of the heart with the arrow -- very cute -- but I'm not quite sold on the other flourishes or the shield with the gradient. I'm hoping for a more letterpress-y logo, in the end.
Thank you so much for your hard work! I appreciate your input very much!
Hi, here are new entries for review ( #37, #38, #39 ). Colors can be changed at any time. If there are any changes you would like to see please feel free to let me know.
I'd be interested in seeing the design of #42 in the two color schemes of #39 and #41. I like those color schemes, but I don't identify as much with the abstract shape of the shield.
We're looking for something that really triggers an emotional response in our prospective clients as something personalized, feminine, stylish, and elegant, so any kind of additional ornamentation or imagery you can think of to communicate love, weddings, or music are great. I can't believe we're so close to the end of the first round, already!
I love the custom lettering you've created! I would like to eliminate the extra "swoop" on the S, though, for legibility.
There is a little bit of gap between the colored ribbon background of "Entertainment" and the edge of the oval frame in #61, #62, #63, and #64.
No need to reset either of these, at this time, but, as we move forward with this design concept, I'd like to see that gap bridged and the "swoop" simplified.
Also -- I like the idea of flower blossoms, but I'm not keen on either the daisies used in our current logo, nor the ones in your latest design. They almost look like gears, which is too industrial for our applications.
After speaking at length with our creative team, your design has moved to the top of our list, because of the strength of the wordmark, itself. The changes you made to the script in the last hours of the open phase of the "contest" are really remarkable and very much in line with our brand style.
However, we're still not "there" with the framing artwork. Are you willing to work on a few more quick revisions and brainstorms with us?
Here are some of our specific concerns:
First: the "heart" imagery is somewhat generic, though we do like the heart dotting the i, and we'd definitely like to keep that one. For the other hearts, we'd like to focus on eliminating those and replacing them with other graphics or restyling them to be more impressionistic.
Second: the framing device lacks the character we're seeing in some of the other work submitted to the "contest," but we feel that this can be developed. The oval and the shield before it are fine-looking but don't have much depth to them in terms of brand identity, whereas some of the other stuff we've seen is more expressive of our themes -- weddings, femininity, love -- without being overly schmaltzy.
Let me know, if you're willing to take a look at these issues and look at some revisions with us.
of course, I'm willing to continue working on this project with you. I'll try to come up with different framing design and submit new variations as soon as I finish them.
Thank you, Srdjan. We appreciate your efforts very much, but these are still not quite in the "right direction" of what we're looking for.
We prefer the wordmark you have created to the other wordmarks, but in the fuller context of the artwork, we are leaning towards another artists design.
We would be interested in discussing purchasing the wordmark, only, from you, but we're not allowed to do that until after we end the contest.
Please let me know, if you might be interested in discussing that with us.
I'm very sorry things turn out this way but I am pleased we had this stimulating and challenging interaction.
I'm ready to hear your suggestion regarding purchase of the wordmark only. However this will be first for me so I would have to relay on your advice about payment details. My only hope is that all this can be solved via Logo Tournament.