#30 I really like this one, but can you make the design of the figure more as if it was draw with ink and brush. So like "Sumi-e" or "Shodo" style. This wil also make the character more abstract which I like. The eyes are too angry, maybe you don't need eyes in the abstracted figure?
#31 I like too, but maybe it's better if the naginata (weapon) in the bottom is also more like a brushstroke. (Same comment as above) so probably a bit more abstract and "Sumi-e"-ish would be better.
Arigatou gozaimashita for your rank and feedback. here's my revised version with brush stoke style. at #52 i japan calligraphic pen style, for #53 i use bold "fude" style with. for both, i use kanji "warrior" at the circle as "O". hope you like it. If there's anything else I can do for you, please don't hesitate to ask.
Hi, maybe the naginata and the character are a bit much. I think You got what I mean by brushstroke, but maybe you can use even fewer lines. Maybe more like this style: http://www.okr1964.org/tamo-detail.jpg
I see a lot of designers taking your idea and working on it in their own way, but I'm sticking with you, I think you can make this work.
Thank you so much for your rank and feedback, this is my revised version based on your feedback. hope you like it. If there's anything else I can do for you, please don't hesitate to ask.