Getting closer try softening the font on Smile and reducing the size of font so the S and the implant can be brought down slightly. Also try unbolding the innovations. Overall this looks pretty good though.
I like the combo of the implant with the S. Would like the fruit of life added back in faded into background. Also maybe add the "I" back to innovations to see how that looks
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So the "mile" looks like a lowercase
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or should I try other fonts?
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You can see the height is different with the S in Smile
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