IdeazDen, thank you for your unique and fresh design. It is certainly one of the more appealing designs we've seen. We like how you have used the font for "small to tall" to include the "l"s with both descriptive words. We also like the brush concept you have used. One hope is that we could give the design some more recognizable characters. Although it might run the risk of making the design look too busy, we were wondering if you could include some child characters holding the toothbrush (or hanging from it, pointing to it, etc?) or somehow involved in the design in entry #34. If you use more than one child, try to make one identifiably small (young) and one identifiably tall (teenager). Thanks. We look forward to your ideas.
Those new submissions weren't exactly what we were hoping for. We liked the color, layout, and style of entry #34, but we'd like to include some silhouettes of children in the left-hand side of the image. Examples of ways the children could be interacting with the toothbrush could be with a tall kid holding up a small kid to hold up the toothbrush, a tall kid and small kid hanging from the toothbrush, etc. Also, we'd like to stick to silhouettes to avoid being ethnic specific. We see kids of all ages and ethnicities at our practice, so a silhouette would best incorporate all children. Thanks.
Those are much better!! I think entry #73 works the best. Now that we have some child silhouettes that depict a "small & tall" concept, we can probably make the toothbrush bristles look more real, as opposed to the images that are currently being used for the bristles. So if you could resubmit entry #73 with a toothbrush that depicts more typical looking toothbrush bristles, that would be great. Perhaps we could see two versions, one with all the bristles the same color as the toothbrush, and another with the new real bristles that alter between the blue and green colors like currently are. Thanks, this has turned into a good working option.
Some variations of the same idea. If you need any other variation, feel free to tell me i will be happy to do it for you Kind regards. Do message me if you need any other changes Dennis
Dennis, can you please resubmit #83 and #84 with the line between "pediatric dentistry" like you have in #88. Keep the big kid blue. We're still debating between the grey bristle and blue/green bristles, so if you could submit both variations with the new revisions, that would be great. Thanks. Ben
Submitting the variations as suggested by you, I have changed the size of 'to' to normal as earlier too and submitting one more variation with bristles in two shades of gray Feedback appreciated Thanx Dennis