Entry #24, EXCELLENT!!!! I loved the way you incorporated the use of the pen into the logo. However, you need to know that the pen does NOT write. It only gives off a scent that, when used, causes a person to actually lose weight (really it does!)! Therefore, you might need to modify the graphic a bit to signify smells or aromas as opposed to writing and ink. Good Luck. Great work!!!
Entry #27 - This is a very good improvement to that which you did previously. You are now in FIRST PLACE!! Still, if I may, a few suggestions I would like to you try. 1. Try to make the SS in SlimScents in the same graphic as you show the aroma ss coming out of tip of the pen. I'd like to see if you can incorporate that into the word SlimScents. Also, please try to change the color from green to a more exciting color - perhaps a royal blue or royal purple etc. etc. Your design is simply - excellent. Well done. Try the two suggestions I've made here. Thanks.