Hi, here's my proposal. I hope I'm on the right direction. Please let me know. If you'd like any changes, please do not hesitate to ask. I'll do the best I could for you. Thanks!
We want to thank you for the hard work in designing your chef character, and after careful consideration, have decided not to use him. Thank you for your hard work. :)
1) Remove the chef character.
2) Use a font-style that looks like wooden planks nailed to a wall for "SliderShak"
3) Add the siloutte of a city behind the shak
4) The shakes, burgers and fries should also be "piling up" around the word "SliderShak"
We think your design could easily be a winner with these changes. :)
Hi, I'm terribly sorry for the delay. Here's the revised version as requested. Looks more clean and not too busy. Let me know what you think about it. Thanks!