SLEEPERLogo Design Contest

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(This comment references Entry #411)

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(This comment references Entry #412)

almost there!

needs 4 more things

1: headphone cord, coming out of the egg, much in the same style of #392
2. saliva drips in #262 can you put that back in, but make it look more 3D, like the saliva is filling up the egg and coming out of the crack
3. make the "S" for SLEEPER a little more clear, some people might not make it out
4. eyes need to be open, wide awake, crazy eyes is what i'm looking for!

THANK YOU, this is the winning design.

update...

(This comment references Entry #413)

THANKS for the new work!

I like what you did with the S
for the S can we have the bottom loop of it come out a little more to the left? make it just a tiny bit more powerful

for example: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Jz5JhoNcrHY/S8pOD5YwU3I/AAAAAAAACsY/QTNM8M00lUI/s1600/graffiti_taxonomy-s.gif

i like the S in the 4th row, second from the right. something like that


can we have the headphone cord come out of the egg, not the headphones? i think that would look better

the eyes need some work, none of them look like a good fit yet.



you are definitely my winning design at this point, just need a few more proofs.
phew...... a month of looking at logos =( crazy

for the eyes....

maybe it should still stick to your original concept/design, using the slant/line for the eyes. how can we use this and make it look like i'm away, not sleeping?

make the slant thicker? i just need to make it look like i'm wide away/crazy. not sleeping

my update as your say.. i make the eye with line, S and headphone cord come out of the egg

(This comment references Entry #416)

thanks for the new work,


eye's still don't look right... try some normal looking eyes maybe?

you added extra splatter in #414 #415 #416 i think it makes it look too cluttered, can you take it out please?

new S in #416 definitely doesn't look right, stick with the S in #415

eye variations

(This comment references Entry #417)

can you give me a sample about the eye content you like?

thanks so much for all the new work

the eyes just don't look right man


let's just go back to the slant/eyes in #262

also can we go back to the drool in #262 + #413

can you also do a color scheme like #246 #262 + one more additional color scheme?


thanks again so much, truly appreciate it! so so so so close

thank you so so so so much for all the work bro!

these are the last small changes:

1. Can you do one last color scheme? Completely different colors from anything else you used. Blue + greens would be cool.

2. Make the slant eyes 0.5 - 1pt thicker? just a TINY bit thicker

3. Drool/spit is popping out too much with the white, can you add a bit of transparency to it? thank you thank you

4. The background splatter, what else can you do with this? I need more explosion splatter. Directional spray would be real cool, just splatter spraying in all different directions

For example: http://chrisoatley.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/ChrisOatley_BrushSplatter.png

Also can i see one version with different color splatter:
http://www.bittbox.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/04/BB_splatter_2.jpg


that's it man, it's pretty much done

thanks again for everything

add eyes

(This comment references Entry #429)

alright let's give up on the eyes..... original design of straight line for eyes still looks the best....

i like the new background splatter you added, thanks

can you upload two last color versions of #428 in the orange/black: #422 + yellow/black: #411

so i will have three different color versions of #428. that's it


THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

last thing,

to make it cleaner, can you put no splatter/background inside the egg?

also i just noticed that you made the eye slants thinner than before? #422 looks thicker, can you please go back to that size? thank you

yes the eye thinner than before...this is i go back for the eyes and clean in egg area from splatter..
thanks

wuppet5

(This comment references Entry #432)

just need the blue/green one too : #428 w/ no splatter inside the egg + the original eyes, slightly thicker

#433, the black splatter is too strong because of the black, can you make the splatter lighter and lighter for the splats on the outside? maybe just add a little transparency to the black. #432 + #428 splatter looks more background b/c of the lighter colors.

thanks so much again for all the work,
transparent splatter just doesn't look as good...

black #433 splatter doesn't look right, let's stick with #411

can you please add the updated drool to #411

final top 3:

#411, add updated drool
#432 is perfect
#428, add the thicker eyes.

so i need two more please, #411 add new drool, + #428 add thicker eyes

#411 needs thicker eyes as well

keep everything in #411 the same, just add drool + thicker eyes

add drool + thicker eyes

(This comment references Entry #437)

add the thicker eyes

(This comment references Entry #438)

THANK YOU, for all your hard work, i am truly truly truly grateful.

I realized that the "S" is not right in the winning design, please make sure your final uploads are with the new, clearer "S".

I like the splatter in #411 as well as #432 + #438, can you please upload final versions of both?


for your final submission, please give me 4 color versions (black/white, yellow/black, orange/black, blue/green) of the following:

1. Caveman face w/ ONLY the headphones, hand + hammer, top egg shell + small drool like #411, nothing else. (no bottom egg shell, surrounding egg, "SLEEPER" lettering, splatter, or headphone cord)
2. Caveman face w/ everything, EXCEPT "SLEEPER" lettering, headphone cord + splatter.
3. Caveman face w/ everything, EXCEPT "SLEEPER" lettering + splatter.
4. Full design with everything but with the older, SIMPLE splatter, like #411 background/splatter.
5. Full design with everything. (full, crazy, new splatter)
6. "SLEEPER" lettering w/ background/splatter
7. "SLEEPER" lettering ONLY. No background/splatter.

4 colors of each would be awesome, thank you again and again and again. Please make sure that the "S" is the new "S". + all the eyes are the same thickness as #432 + #438


thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you.

hi there, which design do you want for the final upload.thanks