Hi! I've tried to conciliate your remarks and also have tried the trabsparency (black transparency goes gray and it really didn't work here so I've passed the ink shapes to the gace background. I've enhanced the text more and posted the letters all connected, making slight rotations to leave some space to have the face seen from the white spaces. You can see some changes between the versions. Hope you like any :-) All the best,
Glad you have extended the contest timeline. Here you go your prefered version of my entries, with some record pieces added to it to make it stronger. All the best,
Hi! I got some time to think about what it could be done yet to make the group more explosive and energetic, with attitude, while having the name the focus point. I've decided to complete your draw wich I think to feature very well the whole message about your music and making it to blend with the name itself. Looks like you're giving away your name, your music, and I really think that the best is to have yourself doing it ;-) Can't get more customized and I think that now, even if your face is seen full, since the text is coloured it really pops from the balck and white scene. All the best,
Hi! Don't know what has happened to my comments when I've submited last entry but I'll try to make them again. I think that after the logo evolution we've done so far to settle the typefont, colors and the character, I was thinking about what else could be done to symbolize your brief and the power of the music, along with your attitude. I've drawed the arms and hands and placed the name like your giving away your name/music and this way your face can be seen fully but the text still has 1st plan due to it's color and thickness. I think that it has a strong layout and features the message you want to pass, in a full customized layout (font and your character :-) Wish you all the luck,
really love #339, can we make the P slightly clearer? some people might not be able to make it out
i really like the hands and the record smashes...
can we make the face/head a little more abstract? maybe take out the hair completely and nose and just have eyes an mouth.... something like that, do your thing!
Hello and thx very much for your new feedback. I'm not at home tillk tomorrow and without access to files but I'll do my best to send new proposals sunday afternoon adressing your concerns. Speak soon,
Hi Sleeper. I really have thought abt the images you've sent all day and I've drawed a new typefont that I think to be readable and mix your preferences from the previous entries with the new inputs. I'm also posting your draw with the typefont cause I really think it's cool and features your personality and what you've requested on brief. About this new input, here you go a new mixage with less details too-plz note your example also has hair, nose... I think we've covered all possible and impossible options on your logo :-) Wish you all the best and I hope you like them! Kindest regards,