Hi Raspy - many thanks for a good first try! I really like this logo, but I think there is too much happening with it. I feel as if I have to squint a little to take it all in. I'd also like to see if we can try and keep the logo to three solid colors as this logo will be screen printed. If we can try to keep within the color schemes of red white and blue, I think that my help in terms of my costs associated with screens. I'd like to see some elements reduced in this logo......perhaps take out our logo altogether or remove the moon...I'm not sure, but we need to play with it a bit.
Many thanks for a great first effort!