We would like to see how the text "Skip THe Bullshit" would look like in you silver/white border of the purple circle. Furthermore, we think that when you put "Strategy into Action" in one font size, it will be more professional. Maybe you can play some more with the font?
Hi Stephen! Thanks for your feedback. Here are a couple more designs for you to look at. I changed the STB to silver, but I can easily change it back to black if you like the impact of that better. I added the "Skip the Bullshit" into the silver border in 2 different spots and also made the border slightly bigger. Let me know what you think. Thanks again!
Thanks for all your designs, we are heading into the right direction :-)
We like #27 the best of your 3 new interpretations. A few comments:
- Could you try to find a more professional font for "Strategy into action"? - Could you make the line "Skip the bullshit" in the border a tad smaller? 2 points or so. - We are curious how STB will look without the gradient. Could you experiment some more with the colors white, black and metal? - We are also very curious how it would look like if you add "Skip the Bullshit" in the bottom of the border. - You may loose the "!" which comes after "Skip the Bullshit" in the border.
We compared all the logo's and chose the 2 we think, when combined and refined, will have the most potential. We're talking about #45 and #27.
Here are some comments, all to apply in 1 new logo :-)
- We would like to see "skip the bullshit" in the border like in #27, but with the fontsize of #45 - We would like to see "Strategy into Action" in the border like you have "Skip the bullshit" in #45. This way we have both "Skip The Bullshit" and "Strategy into action" in the border. So no loose words outside the circle/badge/logo. - Please make sure both "Skip The Bullshit" and "Strategy into action" are readable in the border without being to present.
And when you made a version of the logo with the 3 comments above, we would like to see some font variations on the 3 letters STB:
- We like that the font in #45 is white. However, there is to much space above and beneath STB. Furthermore, there is to little space left of the S and right of the B, it looks to tight. Like STB is crowded or something like that. We would like to see a new font, which fills up the whole circle. Maybe something like #36 ? - We like the metally feeling the logo has, maybe you can try a variation of the new font in the metal color. - When we look at it, we see a metal plate. We think it could be cool if we used metal nails next to the S and next to the B to make it look like the logo is nailed to something.
Hey Stephan! Thank you again for such great feedback! I love the nail concept - I actually did that for another logo I created. Here is the 1st one for you to look at. I will follow up with several more. It's been great fun working with you as a CH so far and hopefully I can create something that you will love!