#224 is a bit too masculine/severe looking ... even if i was a guy, i would be a bit too scared to put some of the product with that logo on my face! i like how you have thought of making the design different and so have tried the same colours, but i think even if the colours were a bit more subtle it still isnt what i am after
#223 i like how u have tried to take it a bit further by putting a line between the two i dots, i have to have more of a think about this one, i think the line might be a bit too severe and takes the focus of the name skin engineer
#222 because engineer is highlighted i think it takes the brand down a notch to more generic, rather then premium, particularly in the bold font you have choosen.
tks very much for your designs - hope this feedback helps!
hi xray ... tks for your design ... appreciate you have put the SE in there for something different ... without the SE in there it just looks like a normal font ... as i want to put this logo on products, i need a good looking logo that just has SKIN ENGINEER in readable looking font ... if i went to scale down your design, unfort this would not work ... i hope this feedback helps you revise your design.
hi xray - tks for your designs ... because you are withdrawing them i cant find them to go back and comment on them ... i like how you included the initials SE in the logo, that was different - but im still favouring your original #381 as its simple and modern looking ... tks for trying to step it up thou with the other designs - appreciate it :)