hi alex - tks for your designs! unfortunatly i think that your designs look more like corporate logos rather then a logo for a premium male skincare brand. also it is important to know that my product will be compared with the likes of other premium skincare brands, so the logo has to jump out at the consumer and make them want to buy it! shelf presence is a must and it must look 'expensive looking'... hope that this feedback helps, look fwd to your nxt revision!
#63 i like how you have cut the corner off the box - it makes it look more upmarket and it hits on the main things that im looking for ... unfortunatley thou i think it looks a little too much and reminds me too much of an existing brand out there called skinn (www.skinn.com.au), so i wont beable to use this concept ... also i would like to run SKIN ENGINEER vertically up the side of my packaging using a screen print all in the one line (at the moment), i think your logo would more work as a stick on label.
tks alex - you are all class! #165 and #166 hit on many of the things that i am looking for; the premium edge comes across, however i am looking for something a little bit more modern, masculine (it feels a bit feminine too me) and 'cool' looking ... tks for your concepts thou! i hope this helps revise the design ...
hi - tks for these #183 is my new fav out of your designs, im still trying to decide if i ilike the font better then the one i ranked you on - need more time there! #182 i dont like the curved lines (this is prob because the straightest point between two points is a straight line)
#185 remins me of a pill that you would swallow ... dont like the circle/oval around skin engineer, but the font looks ok!
i dont know if its intnetional, but the two vertical lines you have used in #183 are actually the mathematicla symbol for absolute, so it kinda too me means skin eningeer is focused on the skin - i like that idea, but still prefer the single line in the middle
i hope this helps - tks for working up all the designs - appreciate it #166 and #183 am leaning towards with what you have come up with, im stil trying to work out which font i prefer ...
tks for your designs - when i tested them the guys said it was just a bit too simple, and they liked that normal text was teaked just a bit, a different k, different dot of the i and so -on (which is the way i was ranking - thankfully!) ... i wil be bringing all the designs (minus colour revisions) that werent withdrawn and individually ranking them all start to finish, so please dont withdraw them, tks again for yoru time