Here are a few more concepts for you to consider.
Keeping with the same objectives, I changed the font for a more "engineered" look.
I have placed the words straight across like you suggested.
I also submitted the staggered versions of the designs as well as I think they would utilize the space on the packaging better, creating more of a visual impact on a store shelf.
let me know if there is anything else you would like to see.
Thanks,
Glendon
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