#28 - I like where it is going, I want you to continue the stripping all around the front side of tie on the "S". I want to see fewer diagonally stripes at more an angle, I want you to use that same blue for the stripes. Can you try a fon that is a litter thinner.
#20,21,23, - Can you use smaller polka dots that are all the same size.
#29 - Don't Like
Thanks