I like #141 & #140 , but my wife says the tie looks a little like a leaf. I like the creativity, however can you make look less leafy and little more like a tie.
Can you change #144 font color of "SIMPLI" to black. Can you change #143 font color of "TIED" to black. Have the tie coming out of the "S" one color. And instead of the two ties being the same length allow the the one underneath to be smaller and narrow to mirror an actual tie. I hope that was clear.
For the final 5, I need you to create an emblem that uses the "S" or the "S" & "T". That embodies the essecence of the product. Because I want to use the emblem with the logo and somtimes as a stand alone.
I asked family and friends to rank the top 5 and your #178 & #150 were always the top 2. So more than likely I'm going with #178. I would like to see a few revisions.
Can you make the font color in "TIED" the same red?
Can you change the slogan color to black?
Can you add the trademark "TM", because I filed that a month ago?
Can you create it also with the registered trademark logo "r" as well?
I will use the emblem apart from the logo on the packaging, so can that be by it's own?
Can the "S" font and size for the emblem be the same as it is on the logo?
I want to see how these changes will look and we will go from there.
Thanks for the revisions. For #192 and #191 the emblem can you take the little circle off of the narrow end of the tie and make it into a point?
For entrys # 192,191,190,188,187,185. I want you to replace the slogan with "Neckwear Styling System" (only in the white background for now)
I'm still deciding on the product packaging so I would like to experiment with different backgrounds and color combinations. #192, 191 - Red background, black "S" & black tie
#190,188,187,185 - Red background, black "SIMPLI", silver or white "TIED", black slogan
#190,188,187,185 - Silver background, black "SIMPLI", Red "TIED", black slogan
#190,188,187,185 - dupilcate the color scheme of # 177
I know I'm asking a lot, but I need to see all these variations while I still have your services.
You will be the winner. I want these as your finally submissions.
#188, make sure you add a period after "EVERY TIME" in the slogan. #196 - is perfect. #190 - make sure you add a period after "EVERY TIME" in the slogan. And the emblem can you take the little circle off of the narrow end of the tie and make it into a point. it resemble #215 #215 - alone #215 - with "Neckwear Styling System" - white back ground , black - "S", red -tie #215 - with "Neckwear Styling System" - red- back ground, black - "S", black - tie #201 - make sure you add a period after "EVERY TIME" in the slogan. #206 - make sure you add a period after "EVERY TIME" in the slogan. #210- make sure you add a period after "EVERY TIME" in the slogan. #213 - with slogan "RIGHT KNOT. RIGHT LENGTH. FIRST TIME. EVERY TIME."
Hey, its no problem I will just change it. But I am not 100% sure about what you mean about adding a period of time after "EVERY TIME", is it like "RIGHT KNOT. RIGHT LENGTH. FIRST TIME. EVERY TIME. EVERY DAY"? Please explain it and I will correct it right away.