The subtlety of the eyes is attractive as it depicts being calculating and alert. We'd like to see some dark grey or gunmetal or dark grey to logo as it appears too light. In particular, the color of the fonts should change a bit. We prefer one name in gold and the other in dark grey (or metalllic or gun metal). We also like to see a line between the tag line and our names.
Can you try to provide an abstract of the lioness' in full body (or partial body) motion (as she's running after her prey)? We'd like to see how you'd interpret the full body action from as per your design style shown in #76.
thanks for your feedback. yess i will make some variation, ok, so if i make a full body (running) lioness, the lion "face" will looking to the right (like the other), or do you want me to make the abstrac running lionness but still looking in front of us?
We like the lioness running to the right, looks great. That's a good body shape and we like the gold variations. However, the colors of the font are too light and we prefer the colors to be a bit more vivid. The Gonsalves is very light grey, so if we can do a darker grey on it, would look better, but not so much that it overpowers the gold color in Silva. Also, can we place the "Inc" horizontally and we like the fact that it is "shorter" than Silva Gonsalves.
Would it be possible to show us a different font style? Maybe a different font without any "feet" but still keep the thickness? We uploaded font styles that we like, and you can find them in our brief.
The tagline has an issue: The word "Straightforward" is actually one word, not two words. So, can we fix that? And, would it be possible to have the tag line in small caps? We think it would look better.