thanks for participating! This outline effect of the lion is going towards the right idea that we like. But, we would like to eliminate the green arc. We understand your idea of balance using the arc, but the lioness looks like she's prowling in the grass, but we rather see her running after her prey. In fact, can we not use circles but foc us on the abstract movement of the lioness? We absolutely love the outline abstract, so we'd like to keep that idea in mind. Also, the font style is good, but we'd like our names to be in two different colors and see if there can be a grading effect (or metallic look).
Finally, we would like to add a line in between our names and the tag line to see if it looks better.