In regards to entry #48, we do like the font of Silva Gonsalves, Inc. But we would like Silva to be in gold and Gonsalves in dark grey or gunmetal grey so that it looks more like its two distinct last names.
As far as the lioness is concerned, her action position doesn't appeal to us. Although she is in an action pose, we prefer other action poses where the hind legs don't overlap. Also, in regards to the scales of justice...we were thinking it to be subtle image of the scales (in a shadow behind the lion) or other less obvious image. There is another contestant that did not choose the scales of justice and managed to place the lioness reaching a "goal" so they are ranking higher simply because it is looking modern.
We also like a line in between our names and the tag line, it shows more definition in the logo. And finally, we are into glossy effects and shadows based on submissions.
If you can try a different body of the lioness in a running position and incorporate her reaching a better positions (a goal), then we'd like to see that.
It looks much better, but the circle resembles a sun, so it looks like a safari image. Can we move away from resembling the sun? Wonderful ideas though!
Thank you for the ranking and the feedback. I have made changes to your latest comment (on #60) and uploaded the design. If you would like to see the changes made to #48 as well, please let me know and I'll update that as well.
Please let me know if there are any additional changes or updates you would like to see.
Hi, I have uploaded some new designs with more of a aggressive looking lioness in a more dynamic moving action pose. Please take a look and let me know if there is anything else I can do to improve the design.
We like the aggressive action pose of the lioness, but we'd like to see an abstract of this image (we imagine an an outline of her body). We do legal & accounting services, so we'd like to attract accomplished professionals and find that we are drawn to abstract shapes more so than silhouettes. Also, see if the lioness abstract works best to the left or keeping it above our names. We'd like the Inc to be beside Gonsalves and we think the tag line should be darker (maybe use dark grey).
In regards to the font, we like that you kept Silva Gonsalves in one line and Silva in gold and Gonsalves in dark grey.
I made the changes you requested with outlines and the matters with the text. Please let me know if there are any changes you would to see on my current designs.