I was thinking more like a solid color of those shades without the gradients. Dark blue color on the right and lighter blue on the left. Grayscale on the bottom below the ring.
Perfect. This is one of the final two logos I want to decide on.
The other version I want to see is described below.
I'd like those same blue colors two toned split down the middle of the shield darker on the right, lighter on the left (no white line separating...just dark blue against the lighter blue. Keep the window right where it is.
Below the ring I'd like to have the same color difference as the blue above the ring but grayscaled.
Great! And is it possible to make the top of the shield quite a bit wider so the shape is more like a 'V'?
I think I want the roof to be wider than the ring. I just uploaded a shield shape in the files for this contest. Take a look at what I mean and let's see if we can make this house that shape with the roof on it, square window, and the ring. Just like this but that shape.
Even something less elaborate and simple than the examples I gave would be great. I just feel like I need that rooted connection with some nature imagery in the logo.
Maybe something similar to this but with the square shaped window in the middle and still encased in the shield: https://bit.ly/2BmShpj
Really I want something that shows a connection to nature. I love this shield as a template and the eclipse represents the earth and the home being rooted to the earth and LIFE, growth, healing being inside of the house.
If you can work with this I think it will be great!
White background, blue tree like shape with window in the middle, white roots.
I hope you understand this situation, after 70 proposal and revision from beginning I don't use sun as concepts. and other designer use the sun. I must respect other designer concepts, if not my account will be banner permanently. Sorry I can make suns and shield design proposal for you.
Let's make the left and right corners of the shield raise up a little higher and make the whole house/shield slightly more narrow....creating a little more of a gap for the ring to go around.
Okay. I really like this logo and it's my top choice but I really want to explore something completely different with different themes to confirm my choice here.
Can you come up with something completely different with the theme of shelter, shield, and healing sun?
I need more options on this window...maybe a different kind?
Also would like to see a version with the roof the same thickness on the left and right but thicker as it meets in the middle, creating a small triangle and lessening the point at the top of the shield.
WOW! Okay...last ask before I go to bed. Let's space out "HEALING" evenly all the way to the end of SHIELDED so the letters just have slightly more spacing than the ones above.
Cool. Okay, let's make that outline as thick as the lines on the window and also add black to the frame of the window and the cross lines in the window.
Also move the roof down so there is no white in between.
You are the only person I'm working with now. Unless something drastically changes I think this direction is what I like the best.
Let's try this without the lightning bolt. I wanna see how that looks! Your other ideas are growing on me and I think we may need to push the bolt out.
One thing mentioned in the description is that we are protecting from wireless frequencies (from mobile phone and radio towers that transmit frequencies).
I haven't had anyone grab onto that idea yet and give me anything.
Thank you for your submissions so far. I'm sure you will be a finalist here!
Can we get the spelling fixed on this one as well. I like this and your other one without the roof. Also making this bolt triangles slightly more melded together. Thanks!
I like this one too! Spelling on Shielded missing a "D". Would like to see the middle of that lightning bolt a little closer together so it looks less like two triangles. Nudge the bottom triangle to the left and the top one to the right. Hope that makes sense! This one is in the top 3 for sure. Thank you!
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Please approve after you download from logotournament.com
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I really really appreciate it. You definitely earned this one!
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Update proposal #269 and more thicker #270
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I just want to see what it looks like to make healing a little bit thicker. Still thinner than Shielded but want it slightly more bold. Thanks!
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I have to decide if I like the thickness that provides or not. Thank you!
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Very late for you! Have a great night. I should have it selected by the time you wake up. :)
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Let's do without the white space on #259 as well.
I want to survey between the 259 revision, this (#265) and #264. Thank you!
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#265 and #266
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Very close, I promise! Thank you so much!
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The other version I want to see is described below.
I'd like those same blue colors two toned split down the middle of the shield darker on the right, lighter on the left (no white line separating...just dark blue against the lighter blue. Keep the window right where it is.
Below the ring I'd like to have the same color difference as the blue above the ring but grayscaled.
Thank you and almost ready to select!
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Let's make Healing this color: 3863a3
Shielded this color: 233d71
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Update proposal #259 with Saturn ring and make it 2 tone of grey.
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Maybe two tones of gray?
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Can we loosen the ring's hold on the shield now so it looks more like the planet Saturn? More like this ring but grey: https://b2b989d215c701ad63d7-288404e13f895703cf2798bf6ae95228.ssl.cf1.rackcdn.com/988656422591-350.png
Also, I think I'd like to make both of the words blue. 'Shielded' as the darkest blue you have on the shield. 'Healing' just a touch lighter.
Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Do you means, smooth like this?
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Does the bottom gray part have the metallic effect too?
Let's get that fixed too and then I think we are really close!
Thanks Jefry!
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I think I want the roof to be wider than the ring. I just uploaded a shield shape in the files for this contest. Take a look at what I mean and let's see if we can make this house that shape with the roof on it, square window, and the ring. Just like this but that shape.
Thank you!
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Update proposal #247 #248 and #249
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No worries, I am still in progress make root and tree.
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I still want to see the other one with the changed roots. After that I think I'll be able to decide.
Thank you! I know I've asked a lot of you.
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Glad we started with just this.
Can we make it just 3 larger roots so it's easier to see? More like this> https://bit.ly/2Gmy7z7
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Please help! :)
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I like having blue, gray, and that dark charcoal in the logo but I feel like it's too heavy on the blue so I'm hesitant to finalize this logo.
I'm open to whatever you come up with on this.
One thought I had was to use a design similar to this one and keep the window in the middle as a square. The green in this could be the blue color. https://www.istockphoto.com/vector/green-leaves-isolated-on-white-background-healthy-lifestyle-conceptual-icon-for-use-gm961505618-262566795
Then bring down a white root system past the eclipse as if the shield is going down into the earth and rooting itself.
Like this root: https://bit.ly/2Tyw4M5
Maybe something similar to this but with the square shaped window in the middle and still encased in the shield: https://bit.ly/2BmShpj
Really I want something that shows a connection to nature. I love this shield as a template and the eclipse represents the earth and the home being rooted to the earth and LIFE, growth, healing being inside of the house.
If you can work with this I think it will be great!
White background, blue tree like shape with window in the middle, white roots.
Thank you!
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Honesty, I didn't get the point of the last feedback.
"Can we try this with the house instead of the ring? The eclipse on the bottom?"
But I try the best with this update, if anything to be modify don't hesitate to tell me.
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I hope you understand this situation, after 70 proposal and revision from beginning I don't use sun as concepts. and other designer use the sun. I must respect other designer concepts, if not my account will be banner permanently. Sorry I can make suns and shield design proposal for you.
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Curious if we could also try another logo with a sunrise concept incorporating the shield and home.
Can't think what it might look like but I think I may need a more spread out logo for that...something not so compacted.
Here's a few ideas for a sunrise...try one like this: https://bit.ly/2WH94wl
Maybe another like this...except shades of gray sun rays: https://bit.ly/2MOBH6i
I'd really like 3-4 different logos to choose from that have different feels so I can do a proper survey of my target audience.
Thank you for your time. You are my finalist!
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal more narrow and add gap between ring and shield.
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Can you come up with something completely different with the theme of shelter, shield, and healing sun?
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Update with shiny ring in grey and blue #225 and #226
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Maybe a few variations, just to see what it looks like.
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Update with six square window
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Thanks for feedback, update with four option with different shade of blue. #220 #221 #222 and #223
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I think this is the last option I want to explore before choosing. Thank you!
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Good morning, sorry for late respond just wake up. Update proposal
1 : #215
3 : #216
5 : #219
6 : #217
6+ : #218
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Top row here the 1st, 3rd, 5th, and 6th. Plus one like the 6th but with square top window.
https://bit.ly/2WDENi4
Thank you for your hard work!
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Can we do these types of windows too before I do the survey? https://bit.ly/2G76pqQ
Thanks Jefry!
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with four different window, with and without glass effect
#202 and #203
#204 and #205
#206 and #207
#208 and #209
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round top square bottom: https://bit.ly/2S6xvEP
Higher round top square bottom: https://bit.ly/2HNJDpB
Top left house icon windows and middle house icon windows: https://bit.ly/2DP4wfN
Round top two square bottom windows: https://bit.ly/2DPkE14
I think this is the home stretch.
Thank you for your continued hard work!
I'm doing surveys and getting feedback today and tomorrow on my two finalists.
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Update proposal window rotate like diamond.
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https://ingoodtastetoday.files.wordpress.com/2016/04/diamond-window.jpg
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Thanks for feedback, update with different roof also with square and circle window #198 and #199.
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Also would like to see a version with the roof the same thickness on the left and right but thicker as it meets in the middle, creating a small triangle and lessening the point at the top of the shield.
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spaced out "healing"
bring the roof down
add the darker border around the windows.
Thank you so much and great work! Have a wonderful day. I'll check back tomorrow.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal space out word "healing".
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I am really liking this one!
Thank you so much for your time on this!
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Thanks for direction, update proposal with 3 option of blue metallic color #175 #176 #177 #178
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https://static3.bigstockphoto.com/7/1/2/large2/217270258.jpg
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I really like the finished look of that but don't want it to look too "cartoony" either.
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Also move the roof down so there is no white in between.
You are the only person I'm working with now. Unless something drastically changes I think this direction is what I like the best.
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Update with another variation with dark outline #173 and #174
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Update proposal #172 and #171
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Maybe a thin dark outline around border of the shield to show it stands alone as a symbol too. Hope that makes sense.
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Thanks for directions, update proposal #168 #169 and #170
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I'd like the colors on the words to be swapped so "Healing" is in blue.
I'd also like the house shape to look a little more like a shield. Check out the deer shield shape on the top right here: https://bit.ly/2SgANog
Thank you! Another breakthrough here. Really like this now!
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #164 #165 #166 and #167, let me know your thoughts.
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I still like the two toned shield...
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Great job!
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with wave or frequency #157 #158 #159 #160 #161 #162
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Not sure that's the type of symbol I want in my logo. Hoping you could come up with something in a waveform or frequency.
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Update proposal #150 #151 and #152, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with wireless wave frequency symbol, this is the early concepts. I will update design development asap.
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Can you give me any other concepts?
One thing mentioned in the description is that we are protecting from wireless frequencies (from mobile phone and radio towers that transmit frequencies).
I haven't had anyone grab onto that idea yet and give me anything.
Thank you for your submissions so far. I'm sure you will be a finalist here!
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Update proposal with bigger bolt with tagline #100 #101 and without tagline #102 and #103
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal without tagline #98 and stacked #99
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Also need the tagline removed as that might change later.
Thank you! You are a top contender so far! :)
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I also would like a version like this horizontal version without the tagline.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #71 and #72, let me know your thoughts.
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update proposals #71 and #72
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #68 fix the spelling, also make like 2 triangle close together #69 and #70, let me know your thoughts.
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I submit new design proposal, let me know your thoughts.
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