Hi, The salon owner (the final decision maker) really likes the design of the word "Shear"; however we need the word "Beauty" to be more prominent. The distinctive part of the name (which includes a play on words - "shear" vs. "sheer") is "Shear Beauty", the descriptive element in the name is "Salon & Spa" (not "Beauty Salon & Spa). The word "beauty" does not have to be as big as the word Shear, or the same font - e.g. it could be a larger font than now, in the position it is now, but maybe ending beneath the "r" in "shear". "Salon & Spa" can remain smaller. Try some variations to see what you think works best.
The salon owner really looks forward to seeing what you come up with. Thanks.
Thanks again for all your designs. On design #43 (ranked #1), is there a way to make sure the "e" in Beauty is clearly legible as well (when sign is viewed from road)? Great work.