Good job You are our top choice, We would like to see the bottom E of Shape aligned with the vertical of the U of house We also would like to see more type option with the "urban sweat lodge" tagline we don't need a wavy line
#98 #99 Regarding the alignment of the E, please let me know if this is what you meant. Also, I've tried two type options for the tagline: serif and sans serif, with different layouts. Let me know what you think.
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Regarding the kerning, the EU are now in correct alignment but we now have a tangency with the O and the bottom corner of the E... you need to fix this. Preference is having the O centered or near centered under the P and E. But, of course, this will cause other kerning issues that you will need to adjust.
#99 alignment for the tag line is nice and this san serif solution is preferable. I would like to see more type alternatives. Perhaps a smaller font with more kerning. Just play around with some options for us.
Sorry for the delay, I was struggling with the kerning/tracking! Here are five type options for the tagline. But first, what do you think about the logotype? Does the letter 'O' look better with respect to the 'PE' combo? I tried to keep it as balanced as possible.
Regarding the taglines, these are the fonts:
#136 Museo Sans (same as the logotype) #137 Aller Light (main difference: no foot in letters like 'a', 'u', 'b', etc.; also, double-storey 'g') #138 Swis721 (main difference: curved stem in letter 'a') #139 Sansation (main difference: single-sided bar in letter 't', tapered spur in letter 'a') #140 Levenim MT (main difference: single-storey 'a', straight tail in letter 't', no foot in letter 'u')
Hi. What is your name, btw. I think we're getting further away for the optimum mark. Let's call it my error in judgement and go back to the original number 24. Just move the U to the left a hair, sliding further along the bottom of the E so that the O is centered between the H and the U...
H O U
This is a very minor movement. I do not have a very blown up view of the logo...
As for the tag line font, one of those is probably on target. I'll get back to you which we choose.
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Thank you very much! Do you want it with or without tagline? Did you like any of those type options? I don't think the system will let me upload a PSD file (it has to be EPS), so I'll upload an EPS for you to approve and then send over the PSD via email. Thanks again! I really appreciate it.