Hmm....I do like how you integrated the waterfall and rippling water effects onto the text in this one. It does miss several elements pointed out in the brief, though, such as wide letters with thin lines and the tribal eagle/hawk with the ink bottle spilling letters. The hawk and spilling letters are pretty important since they convey to the viewer the literary nature of the business. Can we try using skinnier letters for the word "Sevenmile" at the top? Let's go have a closer look at the brief and hit me back with some revisions. Thank you!