Thanks for taking part in our contest, we appreciate your time and effort.
A few quick items on design #24:
1. Like the silhouette effect for the mark 2. Can you remove the leaf 3. Instead of the two color treatment behind the tree, can you try a monochromatic background, with either a green or mustard/orange color (or other color you think might work well). Don't like the blue. 4. Can you try a different script font for the "Seven Oaks". While we like a script-like font for the "personal" nature and approachability, we also want it to convey a bit of elegance/style. 5. Can you provide a version of the revised logo without the slogan, and another with the slogan, but with a non-scripted san serif font.
Thanks for taking part, look forward to seeing the next go-round.
Thanks for the revisions to #24, and like the direction it's going. However, I think the color selection is a bit too bright and in-your-face for us. Can you try out some different colors for the mark, and maybe one where the mark is one color, and the typeface in another color(s)? Not sure that having the mark, "seven oaks" and the slogan all sharing one color is working for us. The color pallette of Blues/Green/Gold/Grey that are used in our web template are strongly preferred (see the brief for the url of the template).
Also, I think we've resigned ourselves to not including the slogan. Can you remove it from any submitted revisions?