Fairly basic treatment, please see public comments for general feedback on horizontal vs. vertical orientation, font selection, etc.
Something strikes us about the overall direction of this treatment, but we're not sure exactly what. We don't get the quadrant effect - what is your thinking behind this, or is it just a general stylized element?
Specific feedback:
1. Can you put the mark to the left, and the type treatment next to it to the right. Strongly prefer a horizontal orientation at this point. 2. With the leaf being such a strong element, can it be a bit "pointier" and not as rounded on the leaf tips 3. Font treatment - can we have a different color treatment for "Seven Oaks" vs. "Hospice Care". Also, can you keep a version with the current font, but also try a script or san-serif font you believe would work as well
Thanks for participating, looking forward to the next round.
Thanks for the revisions. We've not ranked #51 or #50 due to the "setting sun" image that we prefer not to illustrate for our patients' families. Having also seen more development of the "tree" concept in a few treatments, I think we're moving away from that as well. #38 was a cute concept, but the owner thought the array of leaves almost looked like a sequence of a tree falling over, and didn't like it...
Do like #39 - can we see a version with the "Hospice care" centered underneath "Seven Oaks" and another with it left-justified?
Thanks for your feedback. I've just uploaded the changes you suggested and some variations of the oak without the sun. Please, feel free to ask me for any other modification you need.