Definitely like #27 & #28. Clean, simple, and identifiable. Might be a home run as is! Can we see it with all letters in bold as well? I'd also like to see the same design written like a sharpie (still in all caps). Some familiar logos written in sharpie like style are "Disney", "Fender", and "Sharpie".
I'm sorry for the late reply but i was offline all day and just got home now.
Thanks for the wonderful feedback, i'm going work on your suggestions, but i don't know if i can find a good script font to work in all caps the same way. Will try it.