Set Your SailsLogo Design Contest

on further review the tagline is still not legible enough.

much better

Set should be enlarged and the arrow extended over the Your - but now the SET is squashed. Also tagline is not legible and the green font color clashes with other colors in logo

tagline is not clear. there is a space between L and S on sails. otherwise promising...

Are you going to make changes to this?

nope...

interesting...thinking
Again the white writing is not legible
maybe in the green?

thinking of what and how to say, I don't have many sailors in my designer group here.

The arrow is a bit interesting, not at all what I was thinking up and Shrinks 'Set" but concept might work if Set was enlarged and the arrow could extend over more.

I really like the idea of the white in the blue, but it is too small, how about splitting it up into other blue?

i am going to post a funky sketch about the directional arrow.

tagline in white and following the wave (inside of wave)?

I actually like this, but the tagline is very hard to read.

curious what is so hard to get about "line with arrow" - but not sure it would work on this...maybe inside the circle?

slant of the circle is correct but I don't like the yellow brackets and not what I want. I wish I could draw here. An line w/arrow as if you were pointing to a course direction - and it doen't have to connect to the sails, just mirror the slant.

Also, I like the water added on your other entry.

better

also to maybe have the water like on your other entry. Can the tagline be within the water? and I would break up the circle if you can do this, so the circle is around the whole thing...

what would move this up in the ranking is if the circle was turned to mirror the slant of the sails. Adding a line with an arrow (I would point it up) and towards the sails. I hope you can understand.

tagline impossibly small

tagline is too small, decent response to my request.

Done sir...

I like this, if you could make the circle more eluding to a compass or a course direction - also a version with the tagline?