Sermon BrowserLogo Design Contest

My design idea using headphones. Feedback appreciated for further improvements

(This comment references Entry #35)

reduced the elements, more simpler

(This comment references Entry #36)

Thanks for the two entries. I like the concept of #35 but it does feel slightly flat and a little too simple. It is a web-only logo, after all. And whilst it's good to have a bible in the logo, this bible isn't quite right somehow, probably because the cross on the inside of the bible looks wrong.

As you said #36 is even simpler, so the same comments apply, but even more so.

Thanx for the constructive feedback. Another design idea

(This comment references Entry #44)

with cross bookmark

(This comment references Entry #45)

bigger view for clear idea

(This comment references Entry #46)

Thanks for these extra entries. They are better. However, the headphones around the closed book doesn't work for me. It looks as though the book has been clamped shut, whereas an open book is a much better metaphor. Although I like the 3D effect, and the slightly more sophisticated graphics, the basic look of #35 is still stronger.

Thanx for the constructive feedback all through the contest. Here is another entry

(This comment references Entry #53)

another design idea

(This comment references Entry #54)

Both #53 and #54 are better than #44. With regards to layout, I like #35 and #54 much better than #53

However, in becoming more sophisticated we've lost some clarity. I think a main reason is that we now have grey pages - white is better. It would also be good if the lines of text were SLIGHTLY darker than in #35

I'd also be interested to see what you think the best colour scheme would be - ignore colour suggestions I've made, and just give me your suggestion. I want the logo to look bright and appealing, but not garish.

sumbittng the desired changes with different font and colors

(This comment references Entry #55)

another version

(This comment references Entry #56)

another color variation

(This comment references Entry #57)

#56 is your best yet! Could you perhaps try in with two-colours, rather than two shades of the same colour? In terms of colours #54 is the best - two colours + black. Unfortunately I don't like the orange of #57 and the red is #55 is too dark (it looks more brown than red).

The grey used for the bible text is about right in #56 but if you make the outline colours bolder, I think you will need to make the grey darker too.

Thanx for the feedback, yes you are right the three color combination will look good. submitting another variation

(This comment references Entry #58)

just the icon, to see the details of lines etc.

(This comment references Entry #59)

variation in color

(This comment references Entry #60)

another design idea where the icon is morphed visual of Bible and Podium

(This comment references Entry #65)

#65 looks good too - could you try it with a slight 3D/sheen effect on the text - a bit more Web 2.0? Thanks.

with shadow web.2.0 effect on the text of both the logos

(This comment references Entry #74)

another effect on text

(This comment references Entry #76)