Thanks so much for your entries! #12 ---i like the idea of it...any chance to make the line more like a woman growing, with others supporting and applauding her around? I like the colors of yellow and turquoise maybe instead...also, the text in all of them is a little too simple. text should be more fun and different, feminine and playful yet sophisticated.You don't have to put the tag line in the images, we aren't really sure we like it. #16 I like what you are starting here with the person, but I want it to have more meaning and feeling if possible. we are really trying to create an online and local community for quarter life women to do the self reflective, self growth independent work, but who can also feel supported, inspired and empowered by new friendships and connections. Overall authentic interactions amongst open, reflective and sophisticated women. I don't know if it's possible to make the S's in Self and Savvy into women, but I like the idea of the S in self looking like a woman "peeking" inside and starting to unfold her petals, and the S in savvy as an empowered, uplifted, glowing woman who has bloomed, with the applause and support of other women around her.....I look forward to what you come up with! thanks again. Jasmin
#22: I really like this text, but the v's somehow look like r's too! is it possible to make them more clearly v's? #19: i really like what you are doing with this image...is there any way to enhance it and make it even clearer as to what is going on? I just realize that #24 could be evolved too....i really like how with jasmin balance you were able to create a feeling of growth, uplifment, empowerment with the image you made...if there was a way to evolve these to create a similar feeling, that also somehow integrates the support, connection and inspiration from others around her. that would be amazing. Lastly, i like the turquoise color, but the yellow seems a bit too orange..any way to brighten it up? other pastel colors ok too. maybe lavendar? I look forward to your updates!! thank you!!
thank you! #32 #33 #34..i really like the font a lot, is there any way to make sure that self doesn't get lost? #32 i like the depth of the image a lot but it seems that the actual meaning isn't as obvious as in #19. Is there any way to add to the depth of the image but still make sure that there is some understanding of what it represents? #32 as well....I look forward to updates!
Is there a way to make the images look more like people? maybe center the dots on the side people and the middle one a bit more figured like a person? thanks!
#40 I really like the depth and clarity you brought to the image...i'm still hoping you might make the middle figure more clearly a woman, growing, enlightening, gaining confidence etc....thank you!!
We'd like to try and take another approach here. You know from the description what it is that we are trying to accomplish and you've done a good job of that but the logo needs to reflect the young MODERN women that it is targeting! These woman are intelligent and sophisticated. Is there any way we can take what you've done in #34 and 24 and give it a more modern, cleaner feel?
Look forward to hearing from you and seeing your personal take on what more modern versions of these logos will look like!
ps...the reason for new direction is because my partner isn't feeling the direction I've been taking this contest so far, so we'd like to try from a different angle all together. thanks again in advance!
first one (#65) is great. really like it!! Have you played with different fonts for the "Self" and the "savvy". In some logos is worked really well. It also gives you an opportunity to do one font that is really modern and another that is more stylistic or feminine... Just a thought.
Would it be possible to try some more feminine colors for #70? Love 65 and 70 but I think its the colors that are throwing me off for 70. I like that its very modern but it needs to be feminine too!
Thank you for all of your amazing work. So sorry for all of the edits, but we are two different women with two different visions, trying to find a middle ground that we both love! We both agree that we'd like the word Self to be the main focus, and that we prefer when the two words are two different fonts. I like how #74 is a figure blooming from the flower. I really want to make sure the image has more feeling than the flower in #88. My partner seems to really like it however, so if there was any way to integrate my need for a real feeling of empowerment, joy, uplifitment, growth with her desire for clean, fresh, sophisticated, simple. that would be great. So sorry to keep this going so much, we really do appreciate your work and involvement more than you know. --Jasmin
Hi again! Almost done. Is there any way to use the image from #100 and make the fonts more similar to #124? I'd be curious to compare those two...we haven't found anything we like better than #124 yet though! :)
2 questions: 1.can you put Savvy maybe darker color to make it stand out more? 2. If your design wins would it be possible to get copies of older drafts too? thanks again :) great work!