Sea Monkey Ocean AdventuresLogo Design Contest

Hi There- Like what you done here but would like to try some things. I'm not sure the "porthole" reads as one. Maybe it could be altered a bit. The monkey doesn't have to be brown and in general it would be nice to add more color to the design. The Sea Monkey should also be wearing a mask and snorkel and the company is a boat rental one so it would be good to try and get a boat in somehow. I hope these ideas help with direction. Thanks

Hi, already submit new design at #7, is that to crowded ?

Best Regard "Titus"

Hi Titus- Nice work although It is feeling a little crowded (Design #7). I think I would make the porthole the size of the blue ring and get rid of the blue. I would take the lettering and put it outside the porthole and probably lose the outer green ring. The boat in the other example I gave as an idea is a bimini top which is the style of boats I have. I think the colors are feeling a little washed out. It should be bright and fun (purples, greens, orange etc) I think dive fins on the monkey would also be great. I hope this helps open up the middle area. The fishing pole may be crowding things a bit? Thank you

Hi Titus- nice work! I'm still looking for more pop in the colors. I would like to see more purple, lime green, orange and some blue. I want the logo to have a tropical feel. The gold color of the porthole may have more pop if it was against a purple background. The lettering could also use something with a little more style. The grey color of the monkey is not really working for me either. Do you have any other monkey designs? In an earlier version the monkey was smiling which is great. Can you rotate the porthole around so that the latch is on the left and we can see it? Right now it is cut off by the boat. I'm not trying to be critical but I'm just trying to get a particular feel. Great work and thanks and have fun with it.

Hi, please don't worry to criticize the logo, my satisfaction is a happy client, so please do not hesitate to ask any revision or give any direction needed.

Hi Titus- Colors are better for me. I feel like I'm missing a boat as it is a boat rental business. Maybe the porthole could be a bit bigger in the middle area? not sure...I think I would lose the fringes around the outside of the purple, I think it distracts from all the good work elsewhere. Hope this helps and great work! Thanks

How about #17 ?