Sea Monkey Ocean AdventuresLogo Design Contest

Hi There- Entry #13 is the one I like the best of the 3 so these comments are for that one. Its quite fun and I like that. The colors are not my favorite and I would like to see some purples, lime green, turquoise and some orange perhaps. Think colorful with lots of "pop". The monkey can be any color also. The Mahi fish is a little too simplified and needs a bit more detail. The "Sea Monkey" words could perhaps wrap around the top and "Ocean Adventures at the bottom so they will read a little better. Nice job! and thanks.

okay
I'll try to make more details

Very nice work! Just a few things that would be great if you can try. Entry #19 The boat needs to be a Bimini Top. It is in one of the 2 examples I submitted. It is the canopy on top of the boat...hope that makes sense. The hull of the boat is nice with the little anchor (nice touch) I'm also still not sure about the color of the sea monkey. Can't tell you exactly what might work best but can you try another couple of colors? This is very fun! Nice work! Thanks

haha thankyou for 1st
ok i'll try again to bimini
^_^

I am confused in color seamonkey "
there may be something that is more specific to the color of monkeys?

Nice work! Entry #20... This is closer. If you look at the jpg 1 example that I provided it will show you the type of boat I'm looking for. Also the "Sea Monkey" words from example #18 have more pop and works better. Not sure what the white line is behind the monkey but I would lose it. I'm still not sure about the monkey color yet but is it possible to use the brown from entry 13 and maybe put a black shorty wet suit on him? Not sure if that is possible? Thank You

ok ... I tried another version in #23

boat revision will soon do I create

Hey Cahsugian- Entry #23- The background is to busy and it won't translate to t-shirts and other things to well. I think we need to get rid of the white lines, the white thing sticking up behind the monkey, the windshield is not attached to the bimini in the example I have asked you to sample. Raise the Bimini top up higher like the example. The older style and shape in entry #20 is better...still not liking monkey color (to wishy washy). Thanks

#29 and #30
with Bimini boat
like this ?

Once again very nice work...Entry #30- Can I get the green/yellow "OCEAN ADVENTURES" from #29...Also can you put a tail coming up behind him with a Dive Flag attached to it? I like the purple monkey but I i could see him in a brownish color like the stem of the tree in the background? What you have done is great and I like the lettering I'm just not sure it will show up as well on t-shirts and hats. The boat is good. Thank You

ok I will try to dive flag
for production tshirt and cap, can be done with a printing technique
but I will try to screen printing version although it will definitely reduce its detailed color
I know because I also screenprint technique tshirt production in here

we make to spot color #34 This could be to use the technique of screen printing on t shirts
and #33 in grayscale

#32

Hi Cahsugian- things are looking great. Can we try a sunset colored sky in background? Also please remove extra fishing poles and satellite on top of Bimini. Thanks

ok

try a sunset color mybe like this? #37

#38

Looking Good Cahsugian! Sorry to keep tweaking but the purple behind the letters feels different without the purple background...Should we try orange? What are your thoughts? Do we try the blue and white again with a different shade of blue so it doesn't match the water? I would still lose all the extra little "lines" suggesting movement as I don't think they will transfer well on hats and T-Shirts. and probably lose the satellite on top of the bimini top. Thanks and great work!

sorry one more thing...I think the boat anchor should be a little bigger and beefier so it will not get lost on a t-shirt or mug...what do you think? I don't want it to large though...Thanks

#42 #43 #44

Hi Cahsugian. Things are looking really good and we will have this finished very soon. I'm thinking #42 but I would like to see the fish with more of the Mahi Mahi colors. If you google a picture you will see they are more of the lime green color and yellow with blue on the dorsal fin and tail and a little around the mouth. The reason I would like to see more of that is I want to have the "OCEAN ADVENTURES" in blue but not the same as #44, maybe closer to the lettering of Sea Monkey on this #42. We will have blue lettering and blue water and blue boat so I would like to make the fish more of the greenish yellow color.I hope this is not frustrating you too much. Its mostly just colors now and I want the name to be easily readable. One little thing also is the monkey ear. It has this black area in the middle that seems strange? any way that could be made to look like a real monkey ear? Thanks so much it is really getting close.

#45 more green fish

#46

Hi Cahsugian- Great job! I think we are just about there. If you could just smooth out the greenish yellow on the belly of the fish that would be great. Subtle details aren't going to translate well when trying to get a t-shirt printed. If you can tweak that area I think its done. Nice job! Thanks

Hey Cahsugian- If you can simplify the coloring on the fish and lose the highlites that would be great...I won't be able to get that printed on a T-shirt. Also just make the seat of the boat white cause I can't get that type of shading on a t-shirt. The logo is great but I need to make sure it can be printed. Thanks

#50 # 51 how?

Hi Cahsugian- this is great but I need to know that it can be printed on a T-Shirt. I think there is too much shading and color blending? Can you tell me if this can be printed on a hat or shirt? Thanks, Stewart

Only in fish or also in monkeys too much shading ? ok I will remove some shading

#52

if the process of making t shirts using digital printing techniques, there is no problem even if a lot of shading but if that is in use is a manual screen printing technique, there is one process of separation screen printing can create shading there

#56 how about this

hi...

Hi Cahsugian- I am so sorry I have taken so long to comment. I'm traveling and had limited internet access.

I like #56 but we should use the lettering and boat color from #55 and I think we will be done. You have done an amazing job and I thank you for your patience. Really nice work!!!

#57 done

seems good traveling . to refresh the mind ^_^

Awesome Cahsugian! One little thing I haven't noticed before...it looks like his toe is crashing through the hull of the boat. I also wanted to keep the colors of the palm trees from #56... We are almost done :)

ok

Hi Cahsugian- I'm hoping you get this message as I wanted to thank you for doing such a wonderful job on my logo. I know I wanted a couple more little tweaks but you were no longer able to do them so I went with one that I thought would work best. Thank you so much...you are very talan

Very talented! Thanks and take care...Stewart

you are welcome
I am also very pleased to make a logo for you
I hope that this logo can make your efforts more successful future
to meet at another time

Best regards
Alwi

Alwi is my real name ^_^
very pleased to be working with you Stewart

Hi Alwi- I can't seem to open the files? I click to open and after 10 minutes it just keeps saying that its loading and that is the small image. None of the other files will open eiither? Can you send them as AI or Photoshop PSD files? Thanks, Stewart

Hi Alwi- I copy the files to my desktop and did get them to open. My web guy and T-shirt guys are asking for AI and Photoshop PSD files...can you send those? Thanks, Stewart

oiya? ok I'll try to change it

Thank you Alwi- I will take care of payment as soon as I get them. Cheers!