Screen Across America IILogo Design Contest

Can you remove the graduation cap on the student dribbling the ball? Could you also design another logo with the third box containing a figure carrying a backpack? #69

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Thanks for the quick turnaround. Let's stick with #73 for now. The image of the backpack and the student isn't really clear and I'm not sure we'll be able to make it clearer. Let's try replacing the image in the blue box with a figure sitting at a desk like a student.

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Thanks for the quick changes. Staying with #76, I have a few requests.

(1) Make the blue and red a little less bright. The "orange" is a subtle shade. Can you match that with the red and blue?

(2) The heart is really good because it is slightly abstract. However, the basketball player and student are much more detailed. Could you remove some of the detail of the player and student? Obviously, we don't want to lose the identity (e.g., maybe lose the chair legs). I don't want to use the word cartoon, but the figures could be more cartoonish.

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Ok, I have made changes for colour and figures, please check it , Thanks

Thanks, Arip. We are getting closer. Please take a look at the figures at this link - http://www.simonsfund.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/Race-Flyer-Web.pdf. It will do a better job of explaining the look we'd like. Can the student and basketball player have a simliar to design to the images on this document?

Also, please make the two colors a little brighter. We went from bright to primary.

Finally, can you put a small heart on the chest of the student at the desk and the basketball player?

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Ok, but the link is "The page you wanted could not be found". please check it again, i can't see the page, Could you please give the link again, so i can see the figure student and basketball player that you like.

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I can see the link now http://www.simonsfund.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/Race-Flyer-Web.pdf without dot at the end of Web.pdf

Please check new revision. i have made changes of colour, figure and add little heart on chest.

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#81. I think we are done. I would like to look at #81 next to a modified #81. Please reduce the three images slightly to that there is room for text. At the top (but inside) the blue and orange box, please right "student" (blue) and "athlete" (orange). At the bottom of the red, add "heart".

We are debating whether or not people will know what this logo is saying. We think that adding these buzz words may help. We are not sure if we'll like these additions, but want to see them.

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D

Thanks for feedback, please check the revision, if there is still wrong please give me a feedback, i will do quickly.

Arip, I think we misunderstood each other. The other design was great. You didn't need to move around the squares or the "Screen Across America." I just wanted you to add one word to each square. In the first square, above the student sitting down, add "student". In the second square, below the heart, add "heart." In the third square, above the basketball player, add "athlete."

It will look like this (the x represents the image)

student X athlete
X heart X
SCREEN ACROSS AMERICA

Sorry :) i have add new revision, please check it, and give me a feedback again if that is still wrong :)

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Arip -

Thanks for your creativity. It was a pleasure working with you. You incorporated our ideas quickly and professionally. If you give me your email address, I'll send you a link once the website is launched.

Best,
Darren

One more thing, the JPG images all have a black backround. Can you please send us one with a white background?

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D

Ok,i will send the jpg file : white and black background to your email.
Thanks so much for give best feedback for me so i can do that quickly

Best Regard,
Arip