I like everything about this except the font type for "ON THE WATER" I would prefer just having "Water" in cursive. I'd like to see "ON THE" in regular smaller letters.
i'm so sorry, I am not allowed to change the design like other designers' concepts (LT rules). I can only revise based on all the designs I submitted during the blind phase.
Ok, can you try the following:
1) Placing a sun behind the house.
2) Change the words "ON THE" regular font and smaller
3) Make the word "Water" cursive and enlarged
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https://help.logotournament.com/article/118-copying-what-does-that-mean
I hope you understand.
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1) Placing a sun behind the house.
2) Change the words "ON THE" regular font and smaller
3) Make the word "Water" cursive and enlarged
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let me know if something is wrong/missing something.
Best Regards
Dalhaz
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