#163 This is really nice. Simple, impacting. We can see the "S" and the "Y". We were wondering if you could make the "Y" appears a little bit more. It is only an idea... if you think it will totally destroy your design please don't do it! But if you think you could do it by keeping the same impacting way, then please give it a try. We were also wondering how this logo would look like on other background, like white for example. Very nice work again, thank you for joining our contest.
#163 Hello again, We were wondering how "sarayan" would look like with capital letters? Could you please give it a trial (try)? Thanks again for you really nice work.
We like the capital letters for the all "sarayan". We have just noticed that "free your style" is quite not visible... if looking on the small logo and not the zoom one. Could you find a nice "stylish" impacting way to make "free your style" more visible? Thanks again for your work.
thanks again. We thought about a "glow" effect on or underneath "free your style" like you did underneath the drawing (down the grey part). Do you see what we are trying to express? Sorry it is quite difficult for us to express ourselves properly in English about this kind of matter. Could you maybe try this effect with an "italic" handwriting font? What do you think? It gives a movement effect!!! Thanks for your great work.
#276 Sorry we prefer the logo like it was before, with the glowing effect coming from the grey part (we don't really know if we should talk about glowing effect but we talk about this small line that appears underneath) Then maybe you could repeat this line underneath "free you style", this line could link the all phrase.(like underline). The font could maybe with all letters linked together: "free" linked together, "your" idem and "style" idem. Our thought is to create a movement (speed) effect (from the left to the right). Wouahh it's hard for us to make you understand our thoughts.... sorry! Thank you very much for your work.
Hi, thanks for writing I understand the situation. Here I have uploaded other designs with the required effects. I hope I understood your changes. Your comments are welcome.
#279 so 2 things for the drawing not the font: - Could we try this one with plain colour? No effect on the green, to see how it will look like. We are not sure that the effects can be seen on clothes. What do you think? - Could we have this one in red colour ? Just to see, red is powerful! Thanks again. Regards
#282 #283 #285 #286 We prefer the original effect (shadow) on the drawing. Thanks for these revisions. Red is nice also and in plain colour it works well also. Thanks again
We had some interesting friends feedback: #279 Could you please replace the font "SARAYAN" by the font of "Free Your Style"? #163 Could you place "style" after the bar of the "y"? So it could be bigger and we will keep this nice effect of the "free your" 'stopped at the "y" bar and "style" underneath "an". Hope we are clear enough. Thanks again And happy end of the year 2010 and full of good energies for 2011.
Hi, thanks for your comments. I hope you have enjoyed a good year-end party. Much success in all your projects for 2011. Here's my design with the required changes.
#163 Finally, we would like to know if you could write " free your style" taller so it would be more visible? We really like the way "free your style" is positioned.... it looks nice that our slogan goes till the "y" bar. So the challenge is to write "free your style" taller but by keeping the same space. Thanks again
#292 Could you get the "y" bar a little bit longer so it comes at the bottom of the "e" (of "style")? Just like the original (#163). Thanks for your patience...