excellent job! we ranked ur entry #88 to no. 1! lets get over to finetuning:
we need the e-cigarett symbol more clear recognizable! maybe u can put some lines on the e-cig filter or something like that.
as well we need the smoke upcoming out of the cigarett more clear. as now we understand the smoke is the white space between the blue symbol. pls try to slim the blue lines which border the white smoke as we think this will result more clearness about the smoke swath which people can recognize immediatly as smoke.
we want to change the font of the letter "A" to a font similar to the abstract logo, find it here:
http://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/152451148463-223.png pls try to modify the letter "A" in a similar way.
we offer u a 20usd bonus if you r able to find a creative way to show the cigarett with the smoke outcoming of one of the letters of saphire! find here excellent examples:
http://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/913951248197-223.pnghttp://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/691251244465-223.pnghttp://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/164251213975-223.pngi know this might destroy all ur designs so far, but i would really appreciate ur effort and creativity. soon will follow 2 more brands to be done and we want u to participate on them as well. thx 4 ur reallly good designs so far.