Sandy Bank BayLogo Design Contest

some options to looks at

(This comment references Entry #2)

Very nice. So nice, I'd love for you to check out the three others. Love your stuff. Quite tough to choose between #4 and #6 at this stage.
Thanks!

thanks! i will take a look

Request for entry #6 -- would you please try a version without the bounding box/rule? Might be nice to see those representational sweeps of color (which I read as sand/water/sky) resolve more loosely on the ends. Thanks again. ~Geoff

some new options

(This comment references Entry #7)

Hey, TS...
A request: Can you do a version of #8 with the type from #20 and a version of #20 with the type from #8?
Just like to see 'em if you whip 'em out.
Most appreciative! ~Geoff

Any chance you can you do a version of #8 with the type from #20 and a version of #20 with the type from #8?
Please and thanks!
~Geoff

Sure I am on the way home now I will revise later

ok heres some revised options let me know if you want any tweaks

thanks
jason

let me know if you have any tweaks

Hi, TS! Maybe a typeface option or two? Also might want to try a bit more visual separation between the three words. I love your work, but I know that designer urge to hone and polish. So -- have at it. This is your chance to get completely happy with it. Well -- as 'completely' as an artist ever can. ; )
Thanks,
~Geoff

ok, will have up shortly

here are some versions. i also tweak the strokes some and could continue to tweak forever! lol