Thanks for joining the competition. We like this, especially the color, but again, "Sanctuary" is more about the ministry and life of Jesus rather than his crucifixion.
This is better -- I see you got the "open arms" in there. In my mind's eye I was thinking closer-up, though, so that "Sanctuary" would be across his chest with his arms open on either side of the text. Does that make sense? I'm not quite sure where to rank this yet. . .