Hi lml76,
The client did not provide detailed feedback on this entry, but I personally think it has lots of potential.
Let's try the following changes:
- Make the pictorial thinner (less height on the blocks, about 1/2), and then overall general scale a bit smaller too (maybe 85-90%).
- Try to make the little dents a little bigger and rounded (thin 1/2 circle or oval)
- The font should be less classical. A little more technical, perhaps just a little bit bolder too, but not too much: it needs to have dynamism. Actually, now that I look at your other designs, I think something liek the font in #93 might work
- Please also try an additional version with all of the above + remove the reflection effect
Thank you !
-David