1) The font on #2 is nice and modern, and the color works well. 2) #1 and #3 are not modern enough 3) Overall, I'd say that none of the designs really convey what the client does though.
I will provide more feedback tomorrow after I speak to the client.
This is much nicer, the client really liked it. Your #17 and #16 are among the client's top 5 designs. As mentioned in the general board, this color combination seems to really please her. I think the reason for the ranking is mostly based on her preference for the other designer's pictorial, but this contest is far from over...
Your logos #17 and #16 are now in 2nd and 3rd position. Here are some suggestions for improvement from the client:
#17: try tweaking or changing the pictorial part. She likes the modern feel, but, and I quote, she "sees an elephant" in that pictorial. Now that she said it, I must admit I can kind of see it too ... :-)
#16: the box / font work on the 7 is a bit "too square". Try adding some roundness in that concept.
Thanks so much for your hard work. Unfortunately, the client still isn't convinced by the pictorial. It no longer looks like an elephant :), but does unfortunately does not match her taste either. Do you think you could try something else ?
Hi Grafikus, just a head up to let you know the client is still considering you as a serious contestant. I just read your previous post and am looking forward to a new entry.
Again, as a helper, you may want to re-read the post I made on the general comment board a coupel days ago, where I give direction on what the client does and what the logo needs to communicate.
Personnally, I also think you more than deserve your place in the top 10 and potentially top 5, with extra credit due to the fact that you were the first one to enter the contest ;-)