Salmon UnitedLogo Design Contest

Dear david-watershedwatch

Thank you for rating my design to no.1 so that I can upload the revised design. ok, I made some design variations with people gathered inside the logo icon. I think it is still clean, clear and simple.
#141 #142 #143 #144 #145 #146

I think this one is getting closer - but we need people in the frame - perhaps make the salmon 15% larger - so people can be added, either fishing on the banks of the river, or a fishing boat. It is the people who are united. Not the salmon.

Dear David-Watershedwatch

I've made the design of people group inside the fish and around the fish, I think it's good. but unfortunately your contest time has expired and entered the “Selection winner” stage, so the designer can't upload the revised design logo. whereas, I'm ready to upload this version of salmon logo with additional people elements.

If we can get people into this, like fishing on the banks of the river, or in the silhouette of the fish

with 3 abstract people

Design revision from design #103
with your feedback:

"david-watershedwatch
Flip 180 - change smile to determination try tree, house, person, or some variation, instead of 3 trees"

More salmon fish version...

Dear David-Watershedwatch

thanks for the feedback. This is my revised design, based on your feedback:
"Salmon should be larger ‘United’ should be stronger font (not italic) People should be visible on the banks of the river *or* have some other way to convey the main meaning of the brand, which is that people are united to defend salmon Try different nature-inspired colour combinations (e.g. blue sky, green land, dark blue water)"

Also - this does look slightly more like Trout then Pacific Salmon - delicate difference

Salmon should be larger

‘United’ should be stronger font (not italic)

People should be visible on the banks of the river *or* have some other way to convey the main meaning of the brand, which is that people are united to defend salmon

Try different nature-inspired colour combinations (e.g. blue sky, green land, dark blue water)

Flip 180 - change smile to determination try tree, house, person, or some variation, instead of 3 trees