Safe and StableLogo Design Contest

Hello Blink
Very clever design but feel there is the need to get balance between logo and text size plus also general integration of words and logo.
Could you review the shape of horse head again - the face looking inward and outward is clever but perhaps it is possible to keep this clever creative treatment but amend the top of the horses head to make more stylish.
Not sure re paintbrush mark - like it but would be good to compare with something a little more sophisticated.
Thanks for you work prefer 51 colourway but "&" as in 50.
Thank-you

no problem i'll work on this and resubmit. Thanks for the feedback.

Hi Blink
Really like the number 52 central design - you have responded to the comments re. this perfectly.
The challenge is how to incorporate this with the Safe and Stable name and find the "link" to ensure the integration of the words and visual.
Don't really like the circular treatment but words to right might work.
Re 74 not so keen on this variation except for overall positioning and flow of the circle to encircle the logo.
Look forward to seeing how you take this forward.
Thank-you

Hi Really like #51 please can we see it with the green changed to another shade or colour.

Thanks

Hello thanks but don't think 91 is stronger than 51 but please replace central silhouette in 51 with the 91 central part. Plus please try & rather than "and" . Prefer more professional font to very informal font in 91. But would like to see 51 with hrs text position as in 91. Thanks very much

Here are 4 variations for your consideration based on your feedback.

Hi Blink,

I like the new design #97. The words stacked...but like the horse/human heads in #45. And can you give me some more colours.

Thanks

Martine

Sorry I meant #51

replaced the heads to the originals with the formal stacked writing layout. Let me know if you see a color pallet you like as the options here are limitless. Don't forget changing the color on this mark is very easy to do at any stage if you changed your mind after your contest, so your not locked into any particular color.

Thanks Blink,

Suggest seeing green / dark grey colours for # 108 to replace mid and dark blue respectively. To my mind blue is not quite right for brand
please can you tweak horse profile to make the mouth different as in ranked #3 horse.
Also still think there is something better you can do with part circle swoosh.

Look forward to seeing the new logos

Martine

The mouth comment relates to the current mouth and nose lacking definition as looks too thin near nose / underside.
Circlular swoosh - interested to see this simplified - so not to distract from central silhouette.
Thank-you very much

Slightly better def in the nose / mouth in your design number 52 but this would need to be softened so as not to be so angular

heres a revision for you.

and #134 has a slight tweak to the horse head and color change.

Thank-you could you please have lettering the same size - maybe my eyes but think SAFE is bigger........can you change the colour of the 134 tweaked version to be the paler green.
Could you have a look at the horses head again to see if the definition can be improved slightly - maybe droping the horses head to ensure the fit with the back of the "white" head continues to flow well.
Sorry to be so fussy - this is almost there and we want to ensure we make the right choice.
Thank-you

Here you go. #135. Head defined and more in-line with the adult silhouette. If you have a specific green and can link me to the color online I am happy to replicate it.