Hello, Thanks for submitting your logo design concepts.
Entry #28 - We like the font and style used for the text. We'd like to see the ".net" in all caps too. Also, could you make the vehicle smaller. I think you could take everything thats above the text and shrink it down so that its only above the "PARTS" text. Could you tweak the vehicle to make it look more sporty and off-road looking. It looks like a stock version of the RZR. We'd want it to look more like the Polaris RZR 900 model which is their more high performance model. Maybe deck it out with lights on top (like #22), add a front a rear bumper, and try to show the shocks in between the body and tires. The tires should have more off-road looking tred on them too.
Thanks again, and we look forward to see your revisions!
Love the RZR vehicle design you came up with! And the text portion is really nice too.
Could you try putting it on the left side of the logo with some dirt up against the first letter "R". Then make it look like the vehicle is climbing up onto the top of the logo. One wheel should be just starting to climb the dirt, the other wheel should be on top of the logo. Similar to #68. But you *must* show the articulation of the suspension when you do this. No little chunks of flying dirt either.
Also, try putting a little more space in between the four square blocks. Use a little less black outline around the RZR text too.
minor update request for entry #77 (in 1st place btw): Turn the front wheels just a little to the left (or if you were sitting in the driver seat, to the right) so they are facing more forwards. Not all the way forward though, still want to see the shinny wheels. This should oh so slightly make the bottom of the tires a little more level with the ground (left tire) and top of the logo (right tire). Again, not all the way, the tires should still look like they are riding on the edges. The rear tire should face the same direction as it is currently, but make it just a little more level with the ground, again not all the way level though.
Can you make the red shock look like its mounted to the vehicle just a little higher too. move it just a hair closer to headlight. And make it look more like a coil/spring shock instead of just a tube. The shock and the a-arms shouldn't be parallel to each other.
here's an example image i grabbed from the web to show how the wheels should be turned. but even this example photo is too straight forward. we still want to see the rims.
Text portion of the logo: My partner likes the all black background in #77. I prefer #75. Not sure how we could compromise on the two styles. They both look really good.
Can you brighten up the RZR a bit, dont use as much dark gradient. And try a solid white thin outline around the RZR text. Looks like you applied a silvery gradient to it currently. The 5 red squares should get the same treatment. And finally, brighten up the "parts.net" text too. More white, less gray in the gradient. The black background seems to shrink the bold font some, we want the text to stand out more.
Cant wait to see what you come up with next. Looking forward to seeing your updates.
#97 looks great! the little tilt of the wheel on top of the logo is perfect!
Can you move the vehicle to the left just a little. Not as far away as #95 though. Also, can add just a little more rubber around the rear wheel and tilt it just a little so its more flat on the ground (not all the way flat though).
#98 - tilted the rear wheel in the wrong direction. It looked better in #97. Hard to explain but I'll give it a shot. Looks like you tilted the wheel left-right. I was thinking it should tilt up-down. Try rotating the tire so the top of the tire is tucked into the rear fender a little bit. We should see the same amount of rim exposed as in #97, just a slightly different angle.
The spacing between the vehicle and the text is perfect, thank you!
Also, I'd like to see some lights on top of the roll cage. If its against policy to copy what was done in #70, then I think you could add a "light bar". See image link for example. Make it sleek looking, low profile, with just enough height to show some tiny silver lights inside. It should extend almost the entire width of the front of the roll cage similar to example image link. But the one in the photo is a bit too long, I'd like to shorten its length just a little in the logo.
dont change anything else on entry #99 except the following:
The tire on top of the RZR should have a little gap where the side of it touches the top of the logo. Just like entry #97. That is the only change we want you to make in your next revision.
Make that change and I think it'll be perfect! Thank you very much for your time, the logo is amazing.
Few minor edits now that we can see the larger image:
1 - remove the steering wheel. I'd like to see another version with the steering wheel on the left hand side for us crazy American drivers also.
2 - The spacing between the R and T in the "parts" text is too close together. The T overlaps the R a little. Spread them apart to match the spacing of the other letters in "parts" text please.