These are great entries. You got the colors I had in mind just right. Eah has elements that I like - can you make these changes?
Entry 23 - make 'running' larger with maybe a black shadow to make the letters stand out more, make Stitches a little softer - maybe just italicize? Love the use of the needle for the e. Add 'Quilting Services' as you did in entry 22. Make an outline, border or underline - similar to entry 24, maybe use more black to set it off.
Number 33 is my favorite, but Quilting service is still a little difficult to read. Can you try another font, maybe cursive? How would it look with a border around the whole design? I love the way the stitches end at the needle.